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So like, for those times when we have a new character posted on the sign up, and like... they want more than a Prospect... and stuff.
The character itself has no 'holes', although the noted events section appear to be entirely baseless in the context of the character's biography. There is the assumption that he'll be allowed to open a casino, which I'm uncomfortable with having not seen any asset write up, etc, so I have to (for the time being) ignore that part of the backstory and application.
So it leaves us with 'self made man', which... is baseless as he has nothing to prove that he's made squat.
con-man... yeah, i can work with that.
chequered suit. Irrelevant, and a mockery of the process, but i'll let it slide since I'm likely to murder him with gamma radiation based on my mood today.
Skills... bartering the crown of the queen.
Right. No evidence to support that in the bio at all.
Overrall in order to be in contention for acceptance he needs to do the following;
Any other takers on input on the matter?
EDIT: Not even to mention the fact that he's done "all this" by the age of 20. Which raises questions too. "Mary Sue" type questions.
Character Name: Vilmark Rennow
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?58444-Vilmark-Rennow&p=1141069#post1141069
Noted 'Events': Self made man, con-man, casino manager, and he has a god-damn chequered suit.
Noted 'Skills': He could barter the the Crown off the Queen.
Desired Rank: Enforcer
The character itself has no 'holes', although the noted events section appear to be entirely baseless in the context of the character's biography. There is the assumption that he'll be allowed to open a casino, which I'm uncomfortable with having not seen any asset write up, etc, so I have to (for the time being) ignore that part of the backstory and application.
So it leaves us with 'self made man', which... is baseless as he has nothing to prove that he's made squat.
con-man... yeah, i can work with that.
chequered suit. Irrelevant, and a mockery of the process, but i'll let it slide since I'm likely to murder him with gamma radiation based on my mood today.
Skills... bartering the crown of the queen.
Right. No evidence to support that in the bio at all.
Overrall in order to be in contention for acceptance he needs to do the following;
- Remove the 'Asset' of the Cartel Owned Casino (and traces of it from the biography), and wait until he's accepted to formally submit a proposal to Hutt Leadership.
- Provide more backstory evidence to support these bartering and con-man skills.
Any other takers on input on the matter?
EDIT: Not even to mention the fact that he's done "all this" by the age of 20. Which raises questions too. "Mary Sue" type questions.