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[UPDATED] very Minor
- Changed the Diary-Entry about the Cat
 

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Seven cups of coffee later.... Not even kidding...

I ****ing love it. Kudos.
 

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[UPDATE] - Average
- Layout

 

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I like it, very thought out and detailed. Gives you all the information you need... Not like those other profiles that just tell you a brief part of a characters histroy without giving you any details about their current equipment....
 

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I like it, very thought out and detailed. Gives you all the information you need... Not like those other profiles that just tell you a brief part of a characters histroy without giving you any details about their current equipment....
Yeah, I'm feeling the same about that Issue.History can equal personality, so it's important to write enough to give an Idea who he/she is.And Equipment - well it's the stuff you do shit with so you might aswell tell about it because people can't smell what it does / can do.
 

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[UPDATED] very Minor
- Removed the Diary-Entry about the Cat
- Added a few 'teasers'
 

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[UPDATED] mediocre / regular
- Updated the Fonts, and replaced the Diary with one that resembles actual Handwriting - thanks to Xenomorph for the Font.
 

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Kinda long, but it's a good read. Nice job, man - I enjoyed it.
 

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Just finished reading and it was a pleasure to. You clearly put huge amount of effort into every aspect of your character and are worthy of admiration. It wasn't difficult to read, and I never got bored. The layout was awesome and to put it simply you did an amazing job.

Kudos
 

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[UPDATED] mediocre / regular
- Updated the Layout in the Equipment-Tab.
 

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I'm thinking of bringing this character back into roleplay-action.
Would anyone be interested in roleplaying with this character?
 

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I'd RP with your character, with pre-Jedi Kalza. =P I need some background storyline for her in Coruscant, anyway. If you'd be interested. xD
 

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I'd RP with your character, with pre-Jedi Kalza. =P I need some background storyline for her in Coruscant, anyway. If you'd be interested. xD

That would depend on what you were thinking of.
His current-self presides somewhere in the Galaxy where not even Sector 13 could find him (essentially, utterly away from the grid).
 
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