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NAME: Shroud
FACTION: Sith
RANK: Recruit
SPECIES: Zabrak
AGE: 24
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'2"
WEIGHT:193
EYES: Black
HAIR: None
SKIN: Pitch Black
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A scar going down his right eye.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 7/10
DEXTERITY: 10/10
CONSTITUTION: 6/10
WISDOM: 5/10
CHARISMA:9/10

FORCE POWERS:
Force Shock
Weak Force Persuade.
Weak Force Illusion
Weak Force Choke
Telekinesis (Which is kind of a given because of the Force Choke mentioned earlier.)

SKILLS:
Shroud is an extremely agile person, and a fast person in general.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Makashi

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
His strengths are his speed and agility, but his weaknesses involve being able to outsmart him easily.

GEAR:
He has a Sith War Sword, but that's all.
Dual Bladed Lightsaber (Just built)
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SHIP:
None

DROIDS:
None.

PETS:
None.

PERSONALITY:
Shroud has sort of a split personality, and some consider him crazy. He also loves to kill, and is very bloodthirsty. One of his personalities is a depressed state as to which he's dark and gloomy, however the other personalty is insane and wishes he could rule everything there is. Shroud is a very loyal person who would only betray his side unless 100% absolutely necessary. He's a very fast learner, and can adapt very well to any environments he's in.

If people get in his way when he's trying to fulfill a missions, Shroud takes offense to that and immediately will want that person dead. He prefers to be alone on his missions, because if he has another person with him it makes it feel like that other person's mind says, "This loser cannot do things on his own." Shroud loves to manipulate people to do what he wants though, and he finds it amusing. His common goals are to serve his master and the faction he has decided to join. He rarely uses a blaster, but is pretty decent with them. He is best at killing people before they even know it coming; pretty much a silent assassin.

BIOGRAPHY:
Shroud was born as how every other of the Zabrak species is born. He was kicked out when he was a young-ling at the age of 5. Ever since then he was on his own nobody left to love him or care for him. Over time he grew a second personality which keeps him from being lonely, but the other personality makes him want to kill. He has trained himself to fight normal at hand-to-hand combat, but is not very skilled at fighting with his vibroblade. Shroud may not know how to use swords, but he can still hold his own against anybody with his incredible speed and agility.

Shroud was confront by a Sith recruiter who was looking to recruit more members, and they offered for Shroud to join them. Shroud accepted, and plans to use everything he has to kill all of those in his way. Shroud has since wanted to become a Sith Lord and destroy all that oppose him. Shroud is a kind of person who attacks swiftly and deadly. Shroud will help conquer and defeat the Jedi one day. He is currently awaiting his training from a master.

KILLS:
None

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
None

DUELING RING MATCHES:
The Challenge of Sith

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None

ROLE-PLAYS:
None
 
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Shroud was confront by a dark lord of the sith, and they offered for Shroud to join them. Shroud accepted, and plans to use everything he has to kill all of those in his way. Shroud has since wanted to become a Sith Lord and destroy all that oppose him. Shroud is a kind of person who attacks swiftly and deadly. He is best at killing people before they even know it coming; pretty much a silent assassin. Shroud wants to conquer the Jedi and destroy them all one day.

Xenomorph is the Dark Lord of the Sith in this timeline, but it could be changed to an NPC Sith Crusader. The end of this paragraph seems like it belongs in Personality.

What is a Natas? I couldn't find any information on Wookieepedia.
 

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Xenomorph is the Dark Lord of the Sith in this timeline, but it could be changed to an NPC Sith Crusader. The end of this paragraph seems like it belongs in Personality.

What is a Natas? I couldn't find any information on Wookieepedia.



I thought it meant we were supposed to make up our own species, well I feel retarded now. XD
 

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Ok, it's fixed, and if you can't find this species on Wookiepedia look up Darth Maul and under his species it will say "Dathomirian Zabrak", but I don't think you can find that exact species, but yeah I'm a Dathomirian Zabrak.

I also editted some things up since it's not really approved yet, so is that alright?
 
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Zabrak is a common species in Star Wars, and Dathomir is where Maul came from. I think it was the same planet used in the Clone Wars TV show with Maul's distant cousin.

Looks good now. Although, just to clarify, is he still equipped with the prosthetics, or is that just the picture? Doesn't affect his credibility, but I'm curious. I was really into prosthetic equipment for a bit.
 

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Zabrak is a common species in Star Wars, and Dathomir is where Maul came from. I think it was the same planet used in the Clone Wars TV show with Maul's distant cousin.

Looks good now. Although, just to clarify, is he still equipped with the prosthetics, or is that just the picture? Doesn't affect his credibility, but I'm curious. I was really into prosthetic equipment for a bit.

It's the picture, I had a little fun on photobucket.
 

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No what he means is does your character have prosthetics, or no?
 

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I read your ongoing dueling match. And either this profile is seriously outdated or you're contradicting.
Who's Circe?

Then there's Force lightning. If this guy's a recruit/acolyte, it isn't something he would be able to do.

But you know, don't want to be mean, just pointing some stuff out.
 

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I read your ongoing dueling match. And either this profile is seriously outdated or you're contradicting.
Who's Circe?

Then there's Force lightning. If this guy's a recruit/acolyte, it isn't something he would be able to do.

But you know, don't want to be mean, just pointing some stuff out.

It's fine, I don't think I got the lightning fairly either, so I'll change it up. This is Circe if you wanted to know. But yeah, if you think anything else is OP, I'll be sure to change it.
 
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