Tony

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NAME: Tony
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Nautolan
AGE: 15
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'9"
WEIGHT: 150 lbs.
EYES: Black
HAIR: No hair.
SKIN: Green
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 6/10
DEXTERITY: 8/10
CONSTITUTION: 4/10
INTELLIGENCE: 6/10
WISDOM: 4/10
CHARISMA: 3/10
FORCE POWERS:
Force Push
Force Pull
Force Jump

SKILLS:
Tony is a basic Nautolan, meaning he can breathe underwater. He also has Pheromone sensing skills, so he can sense the emotional state of another being.


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:

Form I: Shii-Cho

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Describe in moderate detail the strengths and weaknesses of your character.

GEAR:
Yellow bladed training saber

SHIP:
None

DROIDS:
None

PETS:
none
PERSONALITY:

Tony is a very nice kind of person who likes to help people out with bad situations. He can tell how a person feels and if he thinks the person is upset he will be right there to help the person back onto their feet in no time at all. Tony is a very happy kind of person, as for he always has a smile on his face when talking to people. He doesn't like to harm others unless it is absolutely necessary, and when he does he feels ashamed of doing so. He respects all life and hopes that the sith will start doing the right thing instead of embracing the evil inside of them.



BIOGRAPHY:
Tony was born like any average Nautolan, but he found out he was force sensative, and was put into the Jedi training academy. He grew up fairly happy there making friends whom he felt were like brothers and sisters to him. Tony never knew what it's like to leave the current planet he's on, and has always wondered what lies on the planets other than the one he's on. One day he found a way off planet, and decided to explore another world. Tony did not like what he saw the world was cruel and evil, and the planet he had visited was Nar Shadaa.. He wanted to cry, because of how badly people mistreated each other. He decided from that day forth he would try to change the universe and all of its inhabitants into kind heated souls. We all know this is 100% impossible, but that never stopped him into trying to find the good in each and everyone's souls.

Tony wasn't ever mistreated by any of the kids at all, and has a relatively good life on where he's at. He's never really experienced death or any kind of bad thing until he left the planet and came back. From his one day travel to another planet though he doesn't like to be on other planets.


KILLS:
None

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
Non

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None

ROLE-PLAYS:
None
 
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Your welcome

Now come and join the class I want to get people for. We'll get an awesome teacher and get to play around with pelko barbs and shrooms for learning jedi powers.
 

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Your welcome

Now come and join the class I want to get people for. We'll get an awesome teacher and get to play around with pelko barbs and shrooms for learning jedi powers.

Ok, I'll join it if you wish.
 

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My opinion (and I can't stress that enough... this is just what I think); rather than numbers, I feel that descriptions work better for the stats. For one, we don't have to guess what '10' is, and secondly it's simply more accurate. As well, if he's so nice, why is his Charisma only 3. Remember, this isn't KotOR, charisma is simply how well you interact with other people.

Another thing, I think you should specify 'the current planet he's on' and the 'planet he went to'. For one, that sticks your character on one specific planet in which he can't move from unless you edit your bio, and bios should be everything that happened, not the present. The RPing is the present and once you finish threads, then you can add them into your bio, if you choose to do so.

Anyway, sounds interesting enough. Good luck and have fun RPing!
 

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My opinion (and I can't stress that enough... this is just what I think); rather than numbers, I feel that descriptions work better for the stats. For one, we don't have to guess what '10' is, and secondly it's simply more accurate. As well, if he's so nice, why is his Charisma only 3. Remember, this isn't KotOR, charisma is simply how well you interact with other people.

Another thing, I think you should specify 'the current planet he's on' and the 'planet he went to'. For one, that sticks your character on one specific planet in which he can't move from unless you edit your bio, and bios should be everything that happened, not the present. The RPing is the present and once you finish threads, then you can add them into your bio, if you choose to do so.

Anyway, sounds interesting enough. Good luck and have fun RPing!

Ok, but I'm seriously sorry about the complications I did on my profile. I wasn't too sure on what planet the Padawan start on.
 
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