U'rac Alvaden

[Gavin]

NAME: U'rac Alvaden
FACTION: Jedi (Grey)
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Dathomirian, raised by Zabrak father, and a human mother.
AGE: 17
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 1.9m
WEIGHT: 92.9kg
EYES: Light yellow
HAIR: Small horns crowning his head. No hair.
SKIN: Dark Brown
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Zabraki face tattoos.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Life on the run has required a lot from him, therefore he is a strong individual but not exceedingly so.
DEXTERITY: He is a natural acrobatic.
CONSTITUTION: He is very healthy.
INTELLIGENCE: His mother emphasized study as a child, so he is well versed in theory, history, mathematics, and sciences.
WISDOM: He is wise beyond his years. Yoda, he is not.
CHARISMA: He can get along with most anyone, until they cross him.

FORCE POWERS:
Note all statistics are on a scale of 1 to 10, ten being complete mastery.
Force Telekinesis - 6
Tutaminis (in the process of learning)
Tapas - 4
Force Cloak - 7
Force Concealment - 8

SKILLS:
Unarmed Combat - 7
Stealth - 7
Bladed Weapon Combat - 8
Marksmanship - 4

Known languages:
Zabraki - Fluent
Basic - Fluent
Huttese - Adept

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Advanced knowledge of Shii-Cho
Zhaboka Double bladed sword fighting style
Studying Djem So
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+ Dedicated to his cause
+ Brave
+ Persistent
+ Incredibly Intelligent
+Understands the Dark Side
- Single-minded
- Easy to anger or frustrate

GEAR:
An ancestral Zhaboka double sided sword passed down his father's family for generations that has been modified with a magnetic clasp that can disconnect into two swords.

Two twin Lightsabers with a simple Durachrome hilt with green blades. One is usually set to stun while the other remains lethal for varying situations. More upon his mood than anything.

A light grey training outfit given to him by his father.

Various training books.

SHIP:
None

DROIDS:
None

PETS:
None
PERSONALITY:
U'rac has been brought up in such a way where he has the capability to suppress his emotions and let them out in spurts in such a way that doesn't allow the flow of the Dark Side to seep in. His father, who was trained on both fronts understood the importance of this ability and stressed it extensively, for if his son were to follow in his footsteps, he could never forgive himself. U'rac is the silent intelligent type, who doesn't like to speak until he feels his input is needed.
BIOGRAPHY:
In his early life, U'rac was the son of an Imperial Most Wanted Criminal. He was raised on the run with his mother and father. His father was an ex Sith who saw the errors and wrong doings of the Sith. The Sith, who were in hiding at the time, launched a covert manhunt for his father and family. Whilst in hiding his wife gave birth to his son, U'rac. When they had their first chance, they had his son tested for Midichlorians, and was pleased to find that his midichlorian count was incredibly high. Because of this, U'rac was exceptionally good at using the Force in early years. Being trained by his father for most of his early life. He is exceptionally well at hiding his Force Sensitivity due to years of having to do it to survive the pursuit of the Sith. He was sent to the temple on Tython at age 12.

His mother was a self-employed Scholar, publishing many articles on various topics, such as ancient technology, philosophies, and so on. She also owned several holocrons of lightsaber training sessions and studied that as a hobby. When U'rac was old enough to read, she was reading to him, the history of the galaxy around them. When he wasn't training with his father in the Force and Zhaboka combat, or well as basic Lightsaber combat (Shii-Cho), he was studying culture, art, combat theory, and anything else he could get his hands on. As a result, he's a few steps ahead of most Padawans. Although not exceedingly so.

 

[Master Maverick]

Couple things.

The link to this profile isn't in your sig (as you alleged in the sign-up thread).

Next; you don't need the categories that are empty. It just adds clutter, mess and confusion to the profile.

Then; more description.
You suggest he has strong emotions...
His father was a Sith, but redeemed himself...
His mother possessed holocrons - they most likely wouldn't be Jedi holocrons (GABA would decide that), so his father stole them from the Sith?
The Sith were chasing them...
They traveled constantly...

A couple things to keep in mind:
The Sith were in hiding until 12(ish) years ago IC.
He was trained by a (former) Sith... why should the Jedi allow him entrance?
I would like to make sure you're aware of the distinction between a Gray Force User and a Gray Jedi; Gray Jedi still follow and heed the Light Side. Either way, the Dark Side is still taboo in the Jedi and its use taken very seriously.

You have a lot going on here and a rich history for this character. Because of the circumstances of his past, though, and the happenings of this timeline, I think we'd like to know a bit more of the specifics. Of course this only helps you as well so you know and understand your character better and on a deeper level so you can play him more accurately and realistically.

 

[Gavin]

By holocrons, I just meant instructional recordings. I didn't know the exact term and figured "Holocron" was a blanket term. As for his pull to the dark side it is very slight. He won't use violence until his life or the life of someone else is in danger. And his "Dark Side training" is honestly limited to the darker uses of telekinesis. Force Lightning was deemed too dangerous by his father to train him in his use. So essentially, there is just a darker shade of a neutral color. So he's a light Jedi, just a light grey. Lawful neutral if you will.

 

[Master Maverick]

Sorry for not being clearer.

Put those changes into the personality/bio and I'll look over it again. The touch of the Dark Side, in any capacity really, is pretty serious, especially with younger individuals.

 

[Gavin]

I've fixed it.