Wilson Monroe

[dblue095]

WilsonMonroe

AGE

► 24​

SPECIES

► Twi'lek​

HEIGHT

► 6 Feet 2 Inches​

WEIGHT

► 180 Pounds​

EYE COLOR

► Orange​

HAIR COLOR

► Blue Tenlcle​

HOMEWORLD

► Kashyyyk​

GENDER

► Female​

FACTION

►Jedi Exiles​

RANK

► Apprentice​

FORCE SENSITIVITY

► Yes​

BIOGRAPHY

Born Wilson Auburn Monroe, Wilson grew up a loner. She stayed at home and read. One day at the age of 13 her mother Tammy was hunted down by a group of bounty hunters. Wilson was with her that day. Chained up on a ship she feared for the worst. Tammy did something she never seen before. She managed to fool one the hunters into freeing them with a mind trick. With little time Tammy Auburn told Wilson, "Find your cousin, Blue will save you." She gave her a hug then hid her in safety before firing upon the hunters. Soon she saw a red light and soon the light disappeared.

A man in a robe appeared in front of Wilson with his hand extened. "hello love. You'll be ok; come with me, let me show you something." He took Wilson by the hand and walked her to her dead mother. Wilson began to cry, "This is what you do when you can't agree with people, not run. I go plans for you little one." Suddenly he wiped the tears from her face.
For 5 years Wilson trained in the force and lightsaber combat. She also managed to push her body in the form of flexibility. Wilson has two goals at mind revenge, and finding blue.

Personality

Wilson is the type of person you would find bettering herself like combat, the force, arms, etc; She's a hard worker. Wilson usually could control her emotions and use them to her advantage. There are a few things that can actually get to her anger. Bringing up mother and lies. Wilson usually is the type to be reserved unless comfortable around one. She can be cruel just to show that she isn't weak despite her size.

Before her mother`s death she used to be so sweet. One nature most would say, however one she saw her mother get murdered she turned cold. In battle people would say her tatis are brutal and powerful. Her intelligents gives her a charm that sticks with people. She's very memorable. mysterious yet informative. Cold yet loving. Maybe there's some light inside that darkshell.

Gear

Lightsaber she gained in her training.
One Collapsible Vibro-Sword
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/collapsible-vibro-sword.77647/ ]
Exile Inquisition armor for the battle
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/exile-inquisition-armor.77151/ ]
Medium Force-Friendly Armor for espionage
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/medium-force-friendly-armor.77087/ ]

Y77 SIMPLEXIAN
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/y77-simplexian.77639/ ]
MC-series Astromech Droid
[ http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/mc-series-astromech-droid.77864/ ]

A white mask that would cover her face and tentacles. A red line would come along the side of her tentacles to the their base which the line would circle around the tentacles and end. If you looked at the mask you would see a mirror image of yourself along with a bar like a common assassin mask would have.(soon to gain)

Slaves and Pawns

Dorox Tahal[Pawn]- Exile turned to pawn after a mission to enslave a village.

Stories

1. http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/control-of-the-youth.77387/#post-1402920
   
2. http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/new-digs.78050/#post-1400975

 

[Soup]

There are pretty much the same issues here that there are in the other profile I commented on.

 

[dblue095]

There are pretty much the same issues here that there are in the other profile I commented on.

updated

 

[Zach]

I know there's been a lot of feedback already on your other character profiles, and there probably needs to be some editing after you've decided what to do, but it seems to me that most of your characters are directly related to each other. Not just in the family sense, but their stories coincide with where they are currently starting in the time-line. If they're all on a ship together, I find it difficult to wrap my head around how they are a part of separate factions.

 

[dblue095]

I know there's been a lot of feedback already on your other character profiles, and there probably needs to be some editing after you've decided what to do, but it seems to me that most of your characters are directly related to each other. Not just in the family sense, but their stories coincide with where they are currently starting in the time-line. If they're all on a ship together, I find it difficult to wrap my head around how they are a part of separate factions.

I see some confusion lol. This character has never met her family because she was taken by the exiles as a child.

 

[dblue095]

I know there's been a lot of feedback already on your other character profiles, and there probably needs to be some editing after you've decided what to do, but it seems to me that most of your characters are directly related to each other. Not just in the family sense, but their stories coincide with where they are currently starting in the time-line. If they're all on a ship together, I find it difficult to wrap my head around how they are a part of separate factions.

See the background for Lou and Lotus would make sense for them to be together because they always are. David is the owner of the ship so they ride together. David is independent. Now Lou might be a Jedi and Lotus might be in the Hutt Cartel as a human personality thing we don't kill family

 

[Raydo]

See my comments on Lotus' Profile as they also apply here. At this point, I am going to recommend you really take a look at the rules both for character creation and tech usage. Take a look at other approved profiles and see what they did.

 

[dblue095]

See my comments on Lotus' Profile as they also apply here. At this point, I am going to recommend you really take a look at the rules both for character creation and tech usage. Take a look at other approved profiles and see what they did.

The armor I just like the look of it. That's like saying boba used his rockets in every fight, he didn't. Basically the armor is just for the look

oh and the thing with personality is nobody has a permanent one. It's forever changing. I learnt that through psychology in college.
That`s main reason I find it hard to write a personality because its never stagnant. One day a man might wake up focused on one thing, next day focused on the other. We all are bipolar just at different times.

 

[dblue095]

See my comments on Lotus' Profile as they also apply here. At this point, I am going to recommend you really take a look at the rules both for character creation and tech usage. Take a look at other approved profiles and see what they did.

actually I did look at the rules. All the tech is up to date I can assure that. On personality some is in every bio but it's a forever changing thing I cant have it be stagnant.

 

[Raydo]

You can change a personality as it changes over time. It gives other people an idea of the type of person your character is. In short, it is a requirement. Your characters will not be approved without it.

 

[dblue095]

You can change a personality as it changes over time. It gives other people an idea of the type of person your character is. In short, it is a requirement. Your characters will not be approved without it.

Im trying to a cool as I can but I don`t see and I just went over the rules for like 30 mins.

"
Subsection D: When making the profile for your character, be sure to make it detailed. When posting a profile, it cannot say "Coming Soon" or be a "Work-In-Progress (WIP)". It must have at least 2 paragraphs per section with a minimum of 50 words each. Writing that said character in which there isn’t a backstory is not excusable: everyone has a backstory. You may find the profile template here and if you still have questions, feel free to consult any members on the site.
Subsection D.1: Please note that when making your character, it needs to be in the correct timeline. Our current timeline is around seven thousand years before Star Wars: Episode I The Phantom Menace. Please read this thread for more information.
Subsection D.2: Please also note that when creating your character’s name, canon last names are not allowed without admin approval.
"

 

[Raydo]

Subsection D: When making the profile for your character, be sure to make it detailed. When posting a profile, it cannot say "Coming Soon" or be a "Work-In-Progress (WIP)". It must have at least 2 paragraphs per section with a minimum of 50 words each . Writing that said character in which there isn’t a backstory is not excusable: everyone has a backstory. You may find the profile template here and if you still have questions, feel free to consult any members on the site.

If your biography section was much longer and more detailed where one could easily pick up the characters personality and how they developed over time, it wouldn't be a thing. As is, your characters are not detailed. I am telling you what you need to do to get to a level of detail where it can be approved. You have spent almost 100 words arguing with me about this... it's not asking much.

 

[dblue095]

Subsection D: When making the profile for your character, be sure to make it detailed. When posting a profile, it cannot say "Coming Soon" or be a "Work-In-Progress (WIP)". It must have at least 2 paragraphs per section with a minimum of 50 words each . Writing that said character in which there isn’t a backstory is not excusable: everyone has a backstory. You may find the profile template here and if you still have questions, feel free to consult any members on the site.

If your biography section was much longer and more detailed where one could easily pick up the characters personality and how they developed over time, it wouldn't be a thing. As is, your characters are not detailed. I am telling you what you need to do to get to a level of detail where it can be approved. You have spent almost 100 words arguing with me about this... it's not asking much.

Hold on because I feel like the tone of this would conversation got taken out of context. Im 19 im not trying to argue but discuss. You feel. I usually don't have a argumentative tone it's more like one of a stoner just in case you thought I was upset or something. I will be fixing this doe

 

[dblue095]

Subsection D: When making the profile for your character, be sure to make it detailed. When posting a profile, it cannot say "Coming Soon" or be a "Work-In-Progress (WIP)". It must have at least 2 paragraphs per section with a minimum of 50 words each . Writing that said character in which there isn’t a backstory is not excusable: everyone has a backstory. You may find the profile template here and if you still have questions, feel free to consult any members on the site.

If your biography section was much longer and more detailed where one could easily pick up the characters personality and how they developed over time, it wouldn't be a thing. As is, your characters are not detailed. I am telling you what you need to do to get to a level of detail where it can be approved. You have spent almost 100 words arguing with me about this... it's not asking much.

And it kind of does mess up my vision of Wilson by going into about her she acts and thinks besides all humans

 

[Logan]

I implore you to take Raydos advice and add the section. It needs 50 words.

This isn’t really a point of discussion. If you don’t want to follow the rules I will have to archive the character(s).

Thanks.

 

[dblue095]

I implore you to take Raydos advice and add the section. It needs 50 words.

This isn’t really a point of discussion. If you don’t want to follow the rules I will have to archive the character(s).

Thanks.

this is suppose to be fun, but all these "NEW OUT OF NOWHERE RUlES" kills it. I been on this site for about 5 years now, the old admins would of let it past. Dont archive now for the fact that I am using the character still

 

[Logan]

this is suppose to be fun, but all these "NEW OUT OF NOWHERE RUlES" kills it. I been on this site for about 5 years now, the old admins would of let it past. Dont archive now for the fact that I am using the character still

The character needs to comply with the rules or it will be archived.

 

[dblue095]

The character needs to comply with the rules or it will be archived.

the rules never state that you need a personailty @Raydo said I need one to join. There`s no rule on personailty

 

[Logan]

the rules never state that you need a personailty @Raydo said I need one to join. There`s no rule on personailty

Doesn't matter. When requested to do something by a staff member, they aren't really asking. You need to comply with the what they tell you to do.

 

[Arcangel]

This thread is locked from further replies for the time being.

@dblue095 cut the attitude, if a character mod asks you to change something, it isnt up for debate.