The character game

Like: her back story is awesome and everything else is too ^-^

Dislike: got nothing here other than the fact that the alignment and personality type seems kinda redundant... but that could just be me ^-^

Theresa

Like: The picture, and the poem at the beginning. It adds a lot to Theresa's character.

Dislike: No colors besides white. :)

Antoine

like: Nice layout and cool character

dislike: well i'm not intending to be rude but here goes: first off Cinn? when you clearly state that he's a Bralor? Don't mandalorians usually have their clan name as their last name? also this is just me but the personality type things kinda seem redundant and don't actually tell much about the person himself as an individual... also I can't see some of those images, namely his weapons... well actually that's all i got ^-^

Bone

Like: Is he supposed to be like... a crazy, chainsaw-wielding hillbilly? I LOVE IT.

Dislike: It's a simple, short profile, but that's not bad as long as it's informative. I guess the only thing I don't like is the font :p

Mya

[not really crazy per say but rather a tempered rage monster :happy:]

Like: Awwwwweeeee so cute ^3^ joking aside, Mya sounds pretty awesome for a 12 year old lol

Dislike: She hasn't met Mire or Theresa yet :unamused:

Bone

Like: The poem at the beginning was awesome. I like the personality Bone has.

Dislike: While I get what you were trying to do with the biography, I just found it difficult to read.

Sunni Chartreux

Like: Always like seeing Lamians and the personality and biography are both large enough to set the stage but small enough to be accessible

Dislike: Eh its the regular template, there are so many spices template-wise on this site to choose from so why go salt and pepper?

Cross

Like: Unique character, and a very distinct voice. Clean formatting. Not many wanderer-type characters on here.
Dislike: It took some time to understand the way he speaks and what he meant. Also, how old is he?

Ayonahim

Likes: Very cool concept; character race, force sensitivity with a little mando thrown in.

Dislikes: No threads yet, she's gathering dust, and that's about it...for now :datass:

Yirim Thrace

like: it's L! also nice not quite a stoner but crazy enough to be one type guy thing you got going on there

dislike: echani all have silver hair unless they're the sub type thyrsian...

Bone

Likes: Impressive poem its really describes Bone and having him tell about his past with his own speech pattern was very cool.

Dislikes: Noting, I don't see anything to nitpick at about this profile

Sei Creel

Likes: Well, you used Zoe from Firefly. So that's worth something in my book already. Beyond that, her backstory is solid, as is her personality section, and her skills/strengths/weaknesses are balanced well.

Dislikes: She seems underutilized with only 3 RP's to her credit. Also, strictly as a personal preference, the default profile layout is uninspired. It's always nice to see something else in place there, so perhaps an upgrade is in order? Still just a point of personal preference though.

And, as always, take your pick. I don't necessarily care which one gets reviewed. Or, you can just skip me and the next person to post can have one of their characters reviewed. Make's no difference to me.

Molok time.

Likes: Well, for one, the layout is nice, and you keep him pretty well balanced in terms of his stats. As well, the personality and history are pretty well fleshed out. Also, yeeee dashade

Dislikes: Well, he seems to have a bunch of weapons for one person...hopefully he doesn't try to carry those all around at the same time. Also, this is just something personal to me, but I think the whole idea of a slave/orphan backstory leading to a character like this is just...overused, to be honest. You used it really well, but, yeah...

And I pick...

Cotan! (first one in the Jedi spoiler tab I have)

Like: Very organized and clean, I love it. :D

Dislike: I'm devastated by the lack of pictures. :(

Gale, haven't gotten feedback on him in awhile. He's boring, don't expect to be wowed. :D

Like: Bacon he likes bacon and thats freaking awesome xD

Dislike: Lack of pictures man :/ how can you have an awesome bacon loving dude without showing who he is? :unamused:

umm... idk pick one ^-^;

Likes: Female gladiator, young with a deceiving appearance and I like the poem thingie :bitchez (I chose Theresa)

Dislikes: A little short, some capitalization stuff but that's my ADHD probably, and in need of a prettying up :p

Seoul sa Exibil
Be sure to listen to his theme song to hear and see the inspiration for his creation lol I wanted a 'fun' character. Well fun for me anyways

Likes: That journal entry was funny as hell to read, and the theme is a perfect match. This guy is like the embodiment of those lyrics. I'd say you nailed the "fun" character you were shooting for. Awesome job, man!

Dislikes: Not sure if it's just my computer screen, or my eyes, or what, but that purple text is a pain to read. Also, under his gear/equipment section one of the tables at the very bottom [right hand side] still has the blank 250x150 picture box and the sample text instead of anything new. What you should do there, just to clean the whole template up and make it look nice, is use one of the other table options [either left pic only, or right pic only]. That way everything will look fully completed.

Aaaand, Mila. There's got to be something people don't like about this girl so far.

Thanks for some feed back on him finally :bitchez Anyways, I will go with another shade and it was blank because I had to go to work >.>

Edit: I am not going, this is just thanks. Someone else can take the floor.

Paradox said:

and it was blank because I had to go to work >.>

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Ah, I see. Apologies then. I probably should have known better in the first place as I've never seen one of your profiles left in a half-assed state. lol

Like: Mila is freaking awesome in just about every way and form ^-^

Dislike: Her name reminds me of Mire :happy:

random pick time again ^-^