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The Derp of Hooves

OD: Original Derp
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Like: well written and well formated profile I wish I could format sometimes lol....

Dislike: He's only a former Waste Ranger :[ WRs for life :3 anyways outside of a small spoiler tag left under his history and the fact that he doesn't look too scarred at all (and that's just me being nitpicky), how can I diss a fellow Waste Ranger? :3
 

Night Owl

Sneaky Padawan - Aka Rogue/Cleric
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You didn't specify a Char, so I pick one: Theresa.
Like: Nice, fluid way of writing, especially loved the sword form, which in my personal like-list now comes right after "SPSE" (Scream Panicky and Shoot Everywhere)

Dislike: Having the most essential things hidden in a spoiler is a nice idea to keep a Char sheet neat by showing the aesthetic bit, but this somehow defies the sense of a Char sheet.

Dawn
 

Arterius

Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria Survivor
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Like: Layout, inclusion of photos, and the infiltrator suit is just pure pure badass. Overall i like it, Dawn's a smashing character.
Dislike: Might be just me but the values of the attributes, skills, abilities and languages kinda blur together a little bit due to what appears to be white on grey.

I chose my one and only character, Leah Valkyrius
 

Hopeless Wanderer

Matukai AFL
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Likes: The profile is well written and allows the reader the opportunity to "know" her. By this I mean that her personality is well sculpted, leaving little to the imagination. As it should be. Overall, she is a believable character that seems real due to abproper balancing od strengths and weaknesses.

Plus, the addition to the section for the droid made me chuckle.

Dislikes: Nothing really... just that you didn't make a character for the Order of the Matukai. Seriously though, I can't really find anything to say negatively about Leah.

Ar'Rhan Ghol
 

Marf

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Likes: Well-formatted with a decently fleshed out personality.
Dislikes: Good lord, keep that font for titles only. All-caps is gross.

Satoryu. Her bio is utter shit, but I just re-wrote the personality.
 

The Derp of Hooves

OD: Original Derp
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Like: it always astounds me how much time effort and love you put into this character as close to being a Mary Jane without actually being a Mary Jane :3

Dislike: the only thing I dislike is that there isn't anything to dislike

Theresa
 

Rector_Ras

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Like: Love the poem at the start, I wish I was better at doing that kind of thing
Dislike: I was expecting a longer bio after the nice personality but I'm assuming you will add as time goes on so not sure if its really a dislike :/

Balin
 
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