The character game

[Cap'n Hobbes]

Like: I <3 the greedy little Ugnaught, well played mate, well played. :3 Nala would love to "play" with him sometime :3

Dislikes: he's everything a Hutt should be, but he's not a slug :c


Nala

 

[The Mild Mannered Robot]

+ The keys for her aptitude with different skills is very handy

- "Playful Kitten" really aren't words I'd use to describe her

Tezlo Varrik

 

[CaptainWolfgang]

Likes: The Mirilian-ness. Mirilians are so cool. I like the stories behind the tattoos. And the R2 unit.

Dislikes: I want to say The Harmonica but I'd be lying. I secretly love that instrument. Good for you, sir.





Kaaaloooo Wolllfftennnnn

 

[Chask274]

Like: His Face Claim (absolutely loved Black Flag!) and his story. It's unique and interesting.

Dislike: Can't really find anything that's not just a nitpick...


Let's go with Aaron Nynir

 

[Chairdor]

Like: Hes a ranger, the formatting is clean and crisp, the biography is berry nice

Dislike: He seems to be lopsided in his warrior inclinations. I understand Mandolorians see war as almost a religion, but even Spartans had hobbies.


Jesse Sarc

 

[Rector_Ras]

Like: Formatting is awesome and I like how you split the Bio into different sections.
Dislike: Not much of a Dislike but why must the flask be in the profile?! I might guess but you know...

Balin

 

[Flying Blind]

Likes: He's a cool character, and it's nice I guesss to see a Sith with a heart, which coupled with your explanation makes a good degree of sense

Dislikes: Not many. His stats are average, the format is nice, the backstory is good, but give the guy a nickname cuz it's driving my autocorrect crazy, hence why I haven't said his name

Ricky or Irkaniel, pick one :)

 

[Marf]

Irkaniel:

Like: Substantial, well-thought out biography that tells a good story.

Dislike: Poorly formatted, large paragraphs make it hard to read.

Andromeda

 

[Cainhurst Crow]

Like: The first-person character backstory. The characters look. The pretty-compelling origin story.

Dislike: Species Cyborg. The Font, what is this? A font for Ants?

Ceres Wyvern

 

[Hopeless Wanderer]

Ceres -

Likes: She has some complexity to her that makes her original and real. I find that you've balanced her well across the board, both as a character and in abilities.

Dislikes: I have a hard time believing that her people would look down upon her for her artificial legs. As a warrior culture, I'm lead to believe they would think highly of her for being willing to fight in against such adversity.

Marthius Vox - Link in Sig

 

[Calixis]

Marthius Vox

Likes: The artwork chosen to represent his appearance is actually a pretty good choice for a Sith. I've not touched Mortal Kombat, but there's a lot of art elsewhere that just feels very out of place for a character. This doesn't.

Dislikes: You tend to overuse ellipses in my opinion.

 

[Rector_Ras]

Like: Well thought out and expanded, see way to many people with like 2 paragraphs in the entire character
Dislike: More a preference but I find it a tad to long. I know some people like putting lots in but I have a short attention span and get distracted :p

Balin Brun

 

[Marf]

Like: He's an inexperienced Sith and hasn't yet been broken by their ways, it'll be interesting to see how he grows.
Dislike: I just don't like that picture, his face makes me cringe for some reason.

Andromeda

 

[Khivas]

Andromeda
Likes: An unorthodox Sith in the best, most off the wall way. Interesting to see a Sith not entirely consumed by the constant need to gain power and go crazy.
Dislikes: The fact that it is indeed so unique that it sort of does take away from what being a Sith actually is.

Khivas Carrick

 

[LilyNion]

I'll just join and see if I can use the dislike, hehe. Being new and such.

Khivas:

Likes: I seriously like how many positive and negative sides Khivas has. ALOT. He looks like a quite unique character that you don't see everyday. And that big ass backstory is always a positive pooint.
Dislikes: It's more about your sheet, then the character itself. I personally dislike the style and how big the letters are. It feels a bit.. 'much' to read because of how big everything is.

As I'm not sure yet if my signature works, I'll just post my link here!

 

[Chask274]

Like: Very unique character. I don't know of any other Diathim charries on this site, so it'll be interesting to see were you go with her.

Dislike: The strength/weakness section is a bit repetitive. However, for a first character, the profile is very well written, good job on that!

Isaac Stover, please. Format in flux atm, please focus on the content.

 

[Struggle wagon]

Like: Very unique character. I don't know of any other Diathim charries on this site, so it'll be interesting to see were you go with her.

Dislike: The strength/weakness section is a bit repetitive. However, for a first character, the profile is very well written, good job on that!

Isaac Stover, please. Format in flux atm, please focus on the content.

LIKE:Unique Stormtrooper character, Well rounded traits, Good personality, in depth bio.

DISLIKE: I'd like to see links in your assets page to the tech or Wookiepedia page so I can get a visual of what the weapon/gear looks like. Your character is versatile in explosives and I'd like to see what type of explosives he uses in his assets page. (Detpack, Breaching charges, Thermal detonators, etc). This is just a personal preference but I imagine stormtroopers to have military style haircuts and your picture looks like it was pulled out of a copy of Teen Beat.

Other than that he looks like a solid character and I'd enjoy seeing him in an RP.



I only have one set of characters so Peter and Paige, Link is in sig.

 

[Crim]

LIKE:Unique Stormtrooper character, Well rounded traits, Good personality, in depth bio.

DISLIKE: I'd like to see links in your assets page to the tech or Wookiepedia page so I can get a visual of what the weapon/gear looks like. Your character is versatile in explosives and I'd like to see what type of explosives he uses in his assets page. (Detpack, Breaching charges, Thermal detonators, etc). This is just a personal preference but I imagine stormtroopers to have military style haircuts and your picture looks like it was pulled out of a copy of Teen Beat.

Other than that he looks like a solid character and I'd enjoy seeing him in an RP.



I only have one set of characters so Peter and Paige, Link is in sig.

Like: You have a great concept going with this. I especially like the artwork on the page. The layout of the page is wonderful and easy to use. It's always good when people actually put thought into their personality paragraphs on their profiles. Good luck with these characters! I'd love to RP with them at some point.

Dislike: The backstory leaves more to be desired. That said, I'm not sure how it would impact the easy-to-use layout of the page and this is coming from someone who tries to write novels with my character backstories, so it's a very passable mistake.

Inga Kelborn (center pic in sig)

 

[The Derp of Hooves]

Like: Mando, Mandos are badass in my book. Also the whole profile looks spiffy and nice

Dislke: outside of a few formatting typos, nothing much :3

Mire

 

[MasterTyvokka]

Like: Mando, Mandos are badass in my book. Also the whole profile looks spiffy and nice

Dislke: outside of a few formatting typos, nothing much :3

Mire

Likes: Yay Waste Rangers!
Dislikes: A bit more to be desired from the backstory tbh. But then again I like writing massive backstories.

Renald