I'd love to read it over, help you build it up and balance things up etcetera, though i don't have a character slot spare to dedicate to another group. Though I'm pretty good with write ups, and if you need a hand with anything, please do not hesitate to ask.
I'm trying to update the roster. Just making sure you're still using Zayne. Which, by the way, you should probably change the title so it's the same name ^^.