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  • How about Malz is sent to a planet suffering from a recent outbreak, and since he's not the best at lightsaber combat, Seamus is made to tag along to protect him, and Malz can teach him compassion.
    Yeah, I know it's there, was just asking in case you already lost interest and forgot XD
    Hey, just so you know, I didn't mean to undercut anyone with that mission thread. I asked Rev for permission to do that mission and he agreed Jedi Mission thread peage 2, and I wasn't aware that anyone had already started that mission...
    I actually have some plans with that RP, thanks for checking it out though, much appreciated, could use you in the future for it I'm sure. Kind of have a long string of events to tie together Caed/Rev/Val I hope. Though if you have an idea for it, PM it my way and I may use it :)

    As for Seamus training, that should be alright.
    IT seems a bit more to me. But I was trying to use the way she spoke and the tone of it to sort of relay that masculinity that she has; she was raised by some dude, no mother, and I was trying to emphasize that...

    As for grammar, I need a bit of help finding the errors, if you could help me out. I know you were trying to be kind, but If I am making errors like this I would prefer that you foregoe kindness.
    I know, I was just playing with you man. :D

    So I see what I had done wrong now...Most of it is easily changable. But is it truely overwrought?
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