Having gotten their attention, Itiki spoke out once again. "Sorry for how that sounded, i just happened to see you two." Itiki didn't know whether to walk down or not, but his body did the thinking for him, and he started walking towards the two, hoping that they didn't get up and start trying...
Ok, so it looks nice. But i do have one thing i'd like to add, where are his skills, attributes, gear, and the other stuff? The biography is great, i love how you explained how he worked his way up in politics. It looks nice, i'll let the moderators and faction leaders have a look at this...
Upon landing on Naboo, the first thing he did was admire its beauty, staring into the crystal clear waters, seeing his own reflection, the water was so calm it was like looking into a mirror. Itiki didn't really have any buisness on Naboo, as he had just come to enjoy himself, and travel. Though...
Itiki, sitting there in the back, now had to explain himself to these men, he took a deep breath, sighing. He then began explaining himself. "I'm only looking to join GALAF because i want to fight against the empire, i want to make a difference. Now, couldn't i have just joined the Jedi? I...
Hello there! I've actually just discovered i could post diverse roleplays on here. And i was wondering if anyone had any interest in Tokyo Ghoul! I know anime probably isn't too popular on here, but i just wanted to check to see if anybody wanted to join. The main purpose of the roleplay would...
I changed the Sith Lord into the Inquisitor, who was mentioned when she was travelling into the tomb. As it isn't a Darth, it is now just an Inquisitor. Does that work better?
Thanks for commenting on my character Malon, but is that really all you want to tell me? No tips or anything, if not, thats great!
I've editted too much, especially on my last character. xD
Hey, i'm actually making a thread about stealing something from a Hut on Nar Shaddaa, wanna join that?
You're invited, i'll send you the conversation and you can read up on it.
Woah, the set up for your bio is pretty cool, i love how you put what happened at certain ages in his life. It's pretty cool, i don't really have anything to say about what you should put, but i thought it was cool.
Bro, your character has 44 (Now 45) comments, good job! (some of them are me joking around)
I hope to rp with your character once you got him all figured out or whatever you gotta do.
Itiki watched the bunch talking to eachother in the middle of the ship, he stayed quiet the whole time, just watching. But then that guard asked the "Commander" whether Itiki should be allowed into GALAF. Seeing that this Commander guy thought he was a Jedi, chances of him getting into GALAF...