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REAL NAME: Leon Longmatch
CHANGED NAME: Adam Nexus Overlord
FACTION: Chiss Ascendancy
RANK: Initiate
SPECIES: Anzat
AGE: 300(Appears to be 23 Physical.)
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6 Feet
WEIGHT: 205 lbs
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: Tan
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Very

STRENGTH: 5/10
DEXTERITY: 9/10
CONSTITUTION: 10/10
INTELLIGENCE: 6/10
WISDOM: 4/10
CHARISMA: 8/10

FORCE POWERS:
Force Sense***
Force Speed**
Force Jump**
Force Leap***
Telepathy***

Force Ranks relating power wise:
Hopeful*
Padawan**
Jedi Knight***
Jedi Master****
Jedi Council Member*****
Grandmaster******

SKILLS:
Hand to hand and Advance Martial Artiest
Knife fighting
Piloting
Battle field medicine
Trained in both Armed and unarmed tactics
Light and Heavy Weapons
Outstanding Free Runner
Great Stagiest
Advance Hacking Skills
Program Splicing and Cutting
Remaking Illegal Programs


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form I: Shii-Cho**
Tràkata*


Statics for his Lightsaber skills:
Hopeful*
Padawan**
Jedi Knight***
Jedi Master****
Jedi Council Member*****
Grandmaster******

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
His Strengths, if you count A courageous mind with a detection to do everything he can for the right thing to do for himself, and for his people. Then I guess you can put that as a strength. Other then that I see nothing special about him other then his Extreme gift in the force. On to Weakness. He has many like any other Anzat being does. He has a fear of spiders, And a fear for insects he hates those creatures. And fears them greatly.

GEAR:
Side Arm 1
Side Arm 2
Stolen Lightsaber

SHIP:
Small Cargo Ship (Capable of Hypespace)

DROIDS:
None

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
The man is strong, courageous, very hard minded. And calm. He rather unpredictable. To say the least. You never know what he will do. However he seems also to have the very traits of a trickier. The Man may be calm, but he is also cunning and smart. Not the brightest mind, but he has enough knowledge to out trick someone. That isn't above his intelligence.

Other then that the man seems to be a very fun and loving person when he is not on missions, and enjoys drinking to pass down his sorrow over the mission, or celebrity with it a drink. However he also has a temper, regardless of him being very patience and calm, if he is engaged or pissed of by some sort of outrageous marking then proper for a an anger bonus.

BIOGRAPHY:

The man was raised and brought up in a royal, family. Has a various amount of wealth. That he chooses not to use. He was also a force User, and was trained by a Jedi Knight. That came to visit daily on for his trips. Jedi Knight had no right to teach him, but he did so Regardless. He also encouraged the man to join the order, His family refused. And wanted there sweet heart to be with them, get married, bang woman, and have kids, as well. be the Center and a powerful Political Figure. But that all came crashing down. When the man turned 23. He wanted to join. A Army, or be part of some form Great Force. To fight, he wanted nothing to do with wealth, power, ruling over a planet. He wanted nothing of that. So He he ran away, stole, a ship. And was gone, from his unknown little annoying planet.

During the next ten years, he experience no form of aging towards his skin.That prevented him from aging and dying of old age, once a certain age came. Yet he was not aware of that, and waited, ten years, then twenty, then thirty, and finally decided, if he was not going to die of age, because of this evil bewitched curse he might as well make the best of his events. In fact he never really realized who he was he was to Ignorant about his race, to know who he was. The Great Self Regeneration Capabilities of his Race, the Great Soup Sucking effect, he always thought of that as a curse.

So he trained for the three hundred years, both in the force, and tactics yet as great as he was with the force, He focused less on it, other then Force Sense. And more on combat training, and what people would do in the Army. And he eventually joined the Chiss people. Great people very intelligence Leon thought, but before he joined he changed his whole name. And made sure that his file of who he really was was gone. He did mange to get his wealth that was given and stored so it can be touched. And use it when he needed to and his life depended on it. He then Later Joined the Immortal Order. As a Initiate. He joined the Immortal order later on, when he was invited in. He was in the Army before hand. And was also a Mercany at one point, as well as a Bounty Hunter. His days as a Mercany was when he was 200 years of age, he was hired to kill. Chiss Iterators and enemies of the Chiss. All whom died at his hand. While his moment bounty hunting days were when he was hunting to simply collect money, for himself. After bringing people to the Dead Drops. Lastly, he did his share of time in the Chiss, as part of the Navy, for four years. Before he got invited by the Immortal Order. He wanted to be part of the Marines, in the Chiss but he choose The Navy for some reason.

KILLS:


BOUNTIES COLLECTED:


DUELING RING MATCHES:


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:
Death Plays Poker and He's Very Good
 
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I can't get over the fact that he has a Couscous mind and is incapable of dying from old age. I really wanted to read the whole thing and give feedback, but I just can't get any farther than strengths/weaknesses...

Again, welcome back Zen.
 

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A fear of incest? :CIsee

And a fear for incests he hates those creatures. And fears them greatly.
 

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I can't get over the fact that he has a Couscous mind and is incapable of dying from old age. I really wanted to read the whole thing and give feedback, but I just can't get any farther than strengths/weaknesses...

Again, welcome back Zen.

It's a typo.

And Kiro his scared of worms, Spiders.=Incests
 

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That's inSECTs.
InCEST is "adult relations" between blood relatives.
 

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Oh, let me fix that.
 

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Sorry to be all Grammar Police, but in this case, I think you'd be better off fixing that, yeah...
 

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14/10 dexterity? Typo or an honest account of his speed? Still, if it's on a 10 scale wouldn't the maximum still only be ten? My only other thing is on his personality... why is his personality being compared to a zucchini?
 

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I don't think it is allowed (or should be) for a character to have an anti-aging gene, unless you are pulling a Benjamin Button type character where the anti-aging gene could kill him later on even if it is good for a time. The reason behind that is because admins don't want characters going from one timeline to the next.
 

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Honest answer that's his speed. And I see no harm in him having Anti-Aging Genes. Nor does it say any where on this site that this is not allowed. Plus his human he can die other means. And Knowing me This character might or may not die early.
 

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Mk. I hate to be a word Nazi here but did you mean courageous and not courgette? A courgette is a zucchini so my mind is like blown by the idea that his personality involves a zucchini in some way.
 

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Honest answer that's his speed. And I see no harm in him having Anti-Aging Genes. Nor does it say any where on this site that this is not allowed. Plus his human he can die other means.

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My question is how exactly did he join the Immortal Order? Unlike the Sith and Jedi you can't just come up and say 'I'm a force sensitive, let me join.' The Chiss would actually need a reason to let you join. As in, Force Sensitivity could've been discovered after trustworthy military service for say, three years? Then the higher ups would ask him if he wished to join the Immortal Order.
In my personal opinion, being asked to join something is far more prestigious than just hopping in with them.


Other than that, I love this profile.
 

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Yes, I meant courageous. English isn't my first tongue. Let me fix that.

I will add on anything, once Zach over sees it. Well, I should have asked Zach about that. He said Starters start as a Recruit, or a Initiate. So I choose Initiate for obliviously reasons.
 
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Yes, I meant courageous. English isn't my first tongue. Let me fix that.

It's all good. I make the same mistakes in Spanish all the time so I know the feeling...
 

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And I see no harm in him having Anti-Aging Genes. Nor does it say any where on this site that this is not allowed. Plus his human he can die other means. And Knowing me This character might or may not die early.
Fair enough, although I do recall reading something about the admins making a ruling on something like that.
 

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Fair enough, although I do recall reading something about the admins making a ruling on something like that.

I just see no harm in having this, if he can be killed by other means. So what if he lives forever, maybe later on in the rp he'll get bored and kill himself. For living so many years. Without any form of dying normally.
 

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The problem is without having a natural way to die is that if the character never gets killed off, you could try to have the character in a timeline that is in the future.
 

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>.> Actually no there are plenty of long lived species that go on another timeline just because of there age, and how long they live. Having a Anti-Aging gene is nothing. Hell a Sniper can snipe him in a thread and his dead.. Given a valid reason to kill him.
 

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A lot of those species aren't allowed to be used because of that, I believe. :c I think it is a legitimate concern personally.
 

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Not Really. I hada Neti who was over 1200 years, and still might be living if he did not pass away once the time jump happen at age 12,000.
 
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