Independent Cremek "krayt" reaver candorus

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NAME: cremek "the krayt dune dragon. " reaver candorus.

FACTION: mandalorians |sith empire (formerly)
RANK: level 2 | master (formerly)
SPECIES: human (Concordian mandalorian)
AGE: 30
GENDER: male
HEIGHT: 5,12
WEIGHT: 190 + his armors weight (220)
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes + trained

APPEARANCE:


his armor and helmet often hide his features, making him nearly unreadable to those not well versed in mandalorians, and his true face hidden unless his helmet is removed.

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In the rare times cremek is seen outside his armor, such as during infiltration missions, cremek has been reported to display a small, thin framed body with pale skin, jet black hair and eyes red like a ruby due to him suffering from narcolepsy. His Mesomorph frame boasting several scars from his past battles, with one going down his chest, Cremek's eyes have a faint glow to them, giving them a stary, shimmery, look to them, like one was looking onto the night sky through a blood puddle, with it stronger in his right eye, denoting that his bloodline once counted a pureblood amongst it, these eyes tend to flash a moment when cremek is channeling the dark side of the force.

He appears quite comely looking, to the normal observer, cremeks face displays next to no emotion besides his usual kind, gentle, smile, a facade well rehearsed, to the especially empathetic observer, it is a state of sadness, With bags formed under his eyes due to apparent lack of rest, mostly from bloody, visceral nightmares induced by his monthly transformation into a exalted, which has unironically desensitized him to extreme bloodshed and suffering.. If Cremek wasn't often found armored and / or covered in blood, head first in slaughter, laughing or smiling like a maniac, one might have found his features.. endearing... attractive, adorable even.. but a second look will reveal the dark side corruption, such as his eyes being cat like, his canines being sharper than normal, and his hair being unnaturally dark in its hue, revealing the calculating, bloodthirsty, phycopathic monster of a man, hell bent on dominating the strong and purging the weak.








ATTRIBUTES:
  • Cremek displays a rather small frame, but do not let that deceive you, cremek is capable of enduring extreme pain to his physical body, and he is also able to move with deceptive power, cremek is intelligent, willing to wait and bide his time for as long as necessary, he is cool, cunning, manipulative, and is willing to sacrifice anything for his own twisted goals.​
  • cremek is the type of sith who prefers to dominate rather than destroy his past.​






"Oh how it would be the world to me if you could give. me. meaning."

cremek is a rather odd person, at times he can display a cool, cunning attitude, he always radiates the energy that he knows more than he lets on, but cremek is also an honest man, he may not be above manipulation, but when he stabs you, you sure as hell won't see it in your back. This makes him one of the few sith one could consider a trustworthy ally, if you can impress him enough.



In order to try and help stifle his almost all consuming bloodlust, he strives to live up to his mandalorian roots and live as close to the mandalorian code of honor as he can. Wearing armor, Speaking the language, Defending yourself and your family, Raising your children as Mandalorians, Contributing to the clan's welfare and when called upon by the Mand'alor, rallying to his cause.

this cultural identity is another one of his coping mechanisms, he takes pride in refusing to let go of his roots, wearing his father's clans armor with pride, If cremek is able to do so, he will gladly assist fellow mandalorians in any way he feels safe to do so.



now, given he and his fractured personality have recovered, where there was once a discordant chorus of intentions, both noble and profane, now there is only one voice, one goal, cremek is truly and fully back, making him all the more dangerous. And now, his enemies are going to regret all the wrong committed to him.

and now, following a simple trip to hoth, cremek has emerged as a changed man, different, driven, no longer does he simply charge forth with reckless abandon, now it seems cremek moves with intention, purpose.

to put it simply, to be cremek, is to wear a mask over a hollow void of a person, wracked with rage, self loathing, guilt, and envy, to live the life of a person who has never been offered a chance to truly think for himself. and he wishes to inflict that suffering and anguish on others in any way possible.

Cremek is like a blade with no name, he yearns for purpose, a cuase he truly can call his own, the ronin eventually stumbled upon a chance to find redemption for himself alongside other mandalorians on a quest for the living waters, and was reborn anew.


*The following is secret knowledge known only by Cremek.*

When traveling to hoth, cremek stumbled upon something.. something dark. Something evil. It has marked him, cremek is exalted. over the course of his curse, he has started to learn more about it, and has started to not just anticipate his transformation, but relish it when it happens, absolutely delighting in the carnage that follows.





BIOGRAPHY:

born to a small Mandalorian clan in the concordia system, cremek has grown up fighting for his place at the table since he was old enough to even comprehend. when he began to show signs of force sensitivity, his worried mother brought him to the strange magic users, those strange magic users were the sith. cremek has never forgotten where he came from, and part of him wishes he got to remain with his family and clan. over the years, cremeks heart was hardened into a predator of his proverbial jungle, pursuing any of his goals with a ruthless passion, where Cremek's tongue can slay you just as well as his saber or lightning. although part of him wishes, deep down in his heart, beneath all the rage, hatred, and pain, that he could simply be left alone, to choose his own fate and destiny.. and now, that he is a sith champion, he might just get that chance..

Due to cremek forcefully opening a barrier door on dantooine, during (link:) Danger on dantooine!. A small copy of the jedis personality has embedded itself into cremek, the "ghost" (its not really one, but a "imprint" of the jedis personality) in cremek's head is a jedi knight who is known as marian wandari, the two commonly come into conflict, as marian tries to "redeem" cremek. This usually manifests as hushed whispers in his ears, urging a cremek to be kind, and find mercy, or hallucinations such as her sitting and speaking to him. This diad formed between time is slowly forcing marian and cremek to become one person, much to cremek's fear, he doesn't want to lose himself..


After some time, Cremek and Marian have now been melded together, further worsening Cremeks mental state, essentially giving him split personality disorder, making him prone to hallucination, and dangerous mood swings that follow.

but now after an incident on coruscant, then hoth cremek has finally become whole..

* following cremeks latest setback in kesh, as he recovers and slowly regains his skills, and continues to grow even stronger, cremek has become an agent of chaos, he is a true ally to none but the most determined of warriors, he now no longer believes in the rule of the strong, but order's reign, his goal to become mandalore is a drive not to conquer and rule, but conquer and unite, he intends to rule not as a sith, but as a mandalore, as in, he doesn't intend to rule through fear and brutality like his predecessor, but respect, as he knows first hand that dictators only bring one thing.. pain. *





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"you walk two worlds, with a heart of beskar, and that is what will have you ascend to greatness. Never forget where you came from, or who you are. Bend, but never break my son." - Nefie aram, saying her farewells before her son takes his trial to become a champion..

Cremek stood, the dry sands of tatooine before him, the wind howling, a sandstorm. Before him laid a Now slain krayt sand dragon.. He had done it, the fight took hours, pushing both cremek and the dragon to their limits, but through cremeks sheer force of will, he had managed to outlast, and slay the creature, cremek thanked his lucky stars, he was still alive, it had taken every ounce of cunning, every piece of knowledge he had in sith sorcery, and some luck, but it was dead, he was the supreme predator! The then acolyte stood on top of the creature, raising his orange saber to the sky, giving a roar of victory.

Once the euphoria of victory was subdued, his several broken bones tended to, cremek approached the carcass. The pearl, if he could shave it down to a crystal shape, he could have it not only forge a saber far stronger in the dark side than his synthetic one, but more powerful, a symbol of the siths victory, and also his reward, He cut it out of the creature, yes, he knew it was extremely difficult to shave this down, without wasting its power, but he was determined.

years passed, cremek was ordained a sith champion, free to enact his own will, while he returned to his comrades base post an expedition, he could feel it, the dread, the lack of respect, and he shuddered, and he could sense it.. the sith had been betrayed. Cremek was lucky, he had always treated those under him well, even a normal soldier was treated with the dignity of a warrior under him, he could have been gunned down by the soldiers there easily, but in a final show of fidelity, though much too late, welcomed him, explained to him what had transpired, provided him a fighter ship, and all his items, and bid him farewell, leaving him there, with the bare minimum to survive.

But cremek did survive, he fought, he killed, he grew, he evolved, like the krayt dragon he slew, he twisted the focusing compartment of his saber, the pearl now shaved to a proper focusing crystal.. and then made an oath upon this blade.

"on my honor, I will see the sith order restored to glory, fully, even if I must die to do so."

Cremek survived an unbearable amount of time in silence, hitting dead end after dead end, cutting down his list of potential places to search. One day,
he had opened his grimoire, what was once a mere hobby had became cremeks link, he had always been told knowledge was power by his mother, and now he finally understood its significance, He had a rumor highlighted in his grimoire, Stobar - Outer Rim Sector, a rumor, that a Info broker had stumbled upon a rather enticing juicy bit, it was all he had.. so he hit the coordinates in, jumping from port to port..

when he had caught up to the broker, he had to bid almost everything he had to secure the info, but it was worth it, a ancient ships wreckage, on nal-hutta, yet to the consumed by the swamplands, he went to the cantina, sighing, he had to refuel, and that's when his adventure truly began..



SKILLS:
cremek displays a rare level of control over the force moves he knows, making him a highly potent sith sorcerer. he knows abilities such as Force Dash, Force empathy, Precognition, Force lightning (storm/direct), drain (aura/ direct), as well nullify (the version where it acts like a one time use shield, kotor style, which has been approved as cannon by disney) , force barrier, force stasis, dominate mind (the dark side equivalent of mind trick.) lift, pull, throw, and of course Tutaminis. he also bears the rare force abilities of battle meditation, malacia, and maelstrom.

cremek is capable of using the much harder hitting Red Lightning, Unlike normal Force Lightning, Red Lightning is generated by a Dark Side individual gathering and releasing cosmic energy of the universe itself. It can also be used to suck the life out of a target. (basically if drain and lightning had a bastard child). this process is much more focus intensive, and much more stressful on the user, with some reports of red lightning users accidentally killing themselves from overuse. understandably, cremek is only able to maintain this attack for only one or two seconds before needing to recover, so this is often used as a final gambit.





while cremek does boast a lightsaber, which he is quite proficient in, he much prefers to manipulate events from the shadows, though that's not to say he isn't capable of outlasting a foe with brute force, cremek is an extreme danger in lightsaber one on one duels, requiring his enemy to use their wits to best him. Due to preferring the force to be his weapon, and due to him being a sith sorcerer (think the siths version of a jedi consular, preferring the force to sabers, like palpatine), he is capable of using the force much more commonly than his counterparts.

but truth be told, cremeks strongest skill has to be his intelligence, while he often appears dense, or clueless, cremek is constantly learning and studying, and he is capable of formulating tactical decisions on the spot so well that they would appear almost pre determined, giving him the reputation for having a plan for almost everything.

Cremek displays a remarkable will to live, he is capable of surviving the worst of blows out of sheer grit.


given how cremek is considered an actual master of trakata, cremeks reaction speed is through the roof, and is capable of competently engaging with several foes at once, he is also able to easily defend against fellow trakata users.

another form in which cremek displays a rare, complete, mastery in is in Form DCLXVI, also known as Atra-Manu (as well as Sai cha, Shiim, Sai tok, and Mou kei as well. to those unfamiliar it was the saber form of Darth Nihilus, and several legends content sith such as darth krayt and jasca.). It focuses on defense, though it also provides the user with plenty of offensive techniques, it is considered a sith unique saber form, though considered almost completely forgotten, cremek rediscovered this forgotten form on one of his many forays into the valley of the dark lords alongside his former master, and has only seemed to improve it, and is now re-applying this visceral form with deadly efficiency. Cremek has studied and continues to repair old saber styles that now give him quite the advantage in combat.

As well as Cremeks extensive knowledge of several modern and ancient lightsaber forms, drawing inspiration from the legendary lord Vaders form, as well as the great hunger nihilus, cremek has attempted and successfully created a form almost completely unique to him, which he has dubbed Form IX: Kadeesh, where slow, but extremely powerful strikes meant to unbalance a foe and play on ones fear and dread, despite its apparently slow nature, Cremeks kadeesh boasts extremely potent saber defense, and easily drains the stamina of a enemy duelist with ease. Despite all it's boons in saber to saber combat, it is almost completely lacking in proper blaster defence.

cremek is also familiar with soken and dun moch.


GEAR:
cremek boasts a meduim armor set along with his saber, the crystal is made with a krayt dragon pearl, giving his saber its signature howl, as well as black and red lights, similar to the darksaber, it is built in the form and shape of a katana. (for flavor only)




As well as a saber gauntlet


Cremek also owns and pilots to devastating effect a tie elder class fighter with all the licensing requirements needed, with it's driod copilot

personal effects:
crest of clan candorus
Sith grimoire containing cremeks notes.
picture of cremek in his mother, smiling.

a pet rabbit known as daisy, who he is rather kind to.



ROLE-PLAYS:
not In chronological order

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CURRENT:​
ABANDONED:​
Quintenary Sunset - cremek continues his undercover position aboard his expedition.​
COMPLETE:​
  • Vengeance of the Sith: Whispers of Prakith - Cremek rallies with several other sith to strike back as a new foe.​
  • Perfect hatred - rumors abound in the sith order of cremek's survival circulate.​
  • Crisis on Verona - cremeks machinations bore fruit, as Verona is turned into a powder keg.​
  • The first of many - Cremek was narrowly bested by cyu in a duel. As cyu steals his cursed saber.​
  • Cantina chaos - cremek engages in a high steaks duel out of his element, forcing a Jedi to flee for her life.​
  • Swamped with work - cremek makes a temporary alliance with a jedi for the sake of recovering an artifact from an ancient rebellion era sith cruiser.​
  • JedI temple: all alone - Cremek confronts a lone padawan who lost his master.​
  • Those who came before - cremek enters the valley of the dark lords, braving danger, nearly dying to a sith hunter.​
  • Danger on dantooine! - Cremek flies to dantooine alongside another sith and a scoundrel, and Marian is born.​
  • Into the vipers nest. - Cremek assassinates the CEOs son, framing the empire for the deed.​
  • The Beginning - cremek goes incognito as Fenn to explore the unknown
  • Impatience - cremek collaborates with fellow sith to secure a base.​
  • Hoth hijinks - cremek fucks around and finds out with Darth raze. Becoming exalted.​
  • cremek Vs jav - cremek commits to a kesh, apparently losing his life, though when they went to find his body, it was missing..​
  • IT'S RAGGINNNN TIME - cremek attends a party. :)​
  • Go with the flow - honor, duty, redemption, cremek has the potential to find all these on his quest to help relight the forge.​





 
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His Tutaminis is strong holding a lightsaber beam like that. 😆😆
 

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His Tutaminis is strong holding a lightsaber beam like that. 😆😆
for real, XD, but it was the best one i could get out of my goofy AI. i WISH his tutaminis was that strong, would be epic, but unfair. I can imagine, this short, goofy ah sith marauder, trolling someone with it. (yes, I intend to have Cremek be one heck of a troll)

i finnaly generated something better lol.
 
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