Hawke Voddher

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NAME: Hawke Voddher
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Jedi Padawan
SPECIES: Nautolan
AGE: 21
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6’
WEIGHT: 180lbs
EYES :Black
HAIR: None
SKIN: Brown
CREDITS:1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Missing a Tentacle on his head.
DOMINATE HAND: Right
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Hawke Physically is not different than the average being his size. 5/10
DESTERITY: Very Agile. 10/10
CONSTITUTION: Healthy and very tough. 8/10
INTELLIGENCE: Above Average 6/10
WISDOM:. Wise beyond his years. 9/10
CHARISMA: His influence is slighty below average. 4/10

FORCE POWERS:
Force Jump

SKILLS:
Excellent climbing ability. Excellent Lightsaber abilites.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Atura, The LightSaber itself has Doublehanded Hilt, with a treated Adegan crystal producing a dark green saber.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths: the biggest Strength Hawke has is his wisdom. His agility tends to keep things on an even keel when facing a more powerful opponent. Hawke tends to be very diplomatic in tense situations and does not like to fight.

Weakness: Hawkes is very obedient and it seems he has trouble breaking out on his own in the appropriate moments. He has self doubt about becoming a Jedi, because of his wanting to learn who his parents were.

GEAR:
Lightsaber,

SHIP:


PETS:


PERSONALITY:
Hawke is very attune to the force, he often meditates on things for hours. Some of the Jedi Knights find him annoying, because they usually see him meditating or in the archives learning. Hawke has wisdom beyond his years and knows when to fight and when to retreat. He likes to learn and see fighting as an archaic way to solve problems and tends to avoid a fight as much as possible. Even though his Persuasive skills are not powerful he tends to rely on them in situations.
The Masters of the Order, tell the Younglings to be like Hawke, while the Knights see him as scared to do what needs to be done. He does not think of him self as an all powerful Jedi and is very humble. He often feels awkward when confronted with praise. Hawkes has lingering feelings that becoming a Jedi Knight is not for him, he doubts his abilities in all aspects even his superb Lightsaber skills, which some say rivaled Master Arca Jeth.

HISTORY:
Hawke Voddher, grew up in a group of other young Nautolans in the Mid Rim Planet of Glee Anselm. Hawke’s parents were both Nautolans who were smugglers and his father Padmon Voddher is a direct descendant of Dossa, the infamous Nautolan smuggler. Nomi Laatl, Hawke’s mother became a smuggler after falling in love with Padmon. Shortly after Hawke was born and abandoned.
Hawke was always the fastest Nautolan in the group ever since he was a little tadpole. Hawkes ability to swim and dodge in a fight or race came to the attention of Tarc Scapr, a young Jedi Knight sent to Glee Anselm on a diplomatic mission during the Pella Compact. Tarc Scapr then took Hawke to be tested as a youngling. Ever since then Hawke has been immersed in the in the Jedi Culture never really knowing who his parents where or what his history was.
Hawke was praised by the Jedi Masters for his abilities and his obedience. Tarc Scapr took Hawke on a diplomatic mission to Oorn Tchis a rural planet in the outer rim. A battle ensued between Hawke, Scapr and some hostile natives. Hawke was a little too slow dodging blaster fire and lost one of his fourteen tentacles on his head, all that is left is a stubb. After the battle, Tarc Scapr, took hawkes back to the Great Temple of Ossus to find him a Master. After the trip back to the temple, Hawke was sent to intercept another padawan following a very dangerous man.
KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:
Bump in the Night
 
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Ser Gregor

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No errors jump out at me, although I only skimmed it. Might want to nerf the stats just a wee bit. Perhaps make one of the tens an eight?
 

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Your stats are too overpowering, especially for a padawan. You have two categories with a 10 out of 10 stat, and one with an 18 (why) out of 10. You should tone those down.
 
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