OOC Attack on Anoth: The Temple Landing Platforms Discussion

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As long as it's in reason.

If you alter the continuity, such as change the setting where I would continue with my telekinetic attack, then those attacks wouldn't happen.
 

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Sweet. Just confirming :)
 

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and the Sith reeled from the counter

You probably did it by accident, but this is godmodding. You can't write my own reaction for me.

I also don't see any mention of my telekinetic attack.
 
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Hey, you don't have to follow that action of course, you can just ignore it. I will edit the wording soon as I can get to a PC. :)

Also, I interrupted the action before that, and the telekinetic attack is mentioned as dissipating as I interrupted the previous attack.
 
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Sweet.

Edited the posts wording on the 'reeling' bit too. Hope that is more acceptable.
 

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I'm a little confused, what are these tendrils made of?
 

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For some reason I had trouble finding words that would properly describe the attack the way I wanted to. Still do, actually. I wanted to make it clear that Avlis wasn't taking a chunk of rock out of the ground and throwing at you, but I felt as if it would easily be construed that way. 'Tendril' was my best way of saying it.

Essentially, Avlis is telekinetically ripping up the ground around Orlaan and having them try and encompass him. Imploding, in a way. The 'tendrils' were just my way of focusing the attack. Meaning: the ground is converging into four 'waves' which in turn are crashing down upon Orlaan.

I hope that made sense. Tell you the truth, I might just be having one of those days.
 

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Haha, no the rest was completely clear to me, actually. It was just the material of said tendrils I wanted to double-check to avoid edits.
 

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This needs to finish, all the other battles are way past done.
 

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This needs to finish, all the other battles are way past done.

Sorry, GABA. Timely posts aren't my strong suit.

The greater problem is, we're 2 pages in and the only hit is Orlaan's burn.
 

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We could just OoC agree a way to quickly wrap it up as more of a pre-established story rather than a PvP. Things are past the point where it's holding much of a away on future events now (or I suppose present events at the point), and it will help is wrap it up more quickly.
 

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I think considering how long the fight has gone on, enough Jedi have evacuated to the point where Orlaan could throw up a smokescreen and escape. Or, maybe he is prompted to leave after being mortally injured by my attack. Something like that.
 

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"I think, Orlaan could get his ass whooped, or Orlaan could get his ass whooped."

XD

I am not without pride, unfortunately.
 

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Sorry, that's not what I meant.

The whole point of this battle is for Orlaan to stall Avlis long enough for the Jedi to escape. The simple and logical solution is that the Jedi escaped.

I'm just throwing ideas out there.
 

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I was teasing. Going to work now, we can discuss when I'm home. :)
 
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