Razor

[Rjaden Pesanka]

Real Name: Rjaden Pesanka

Known as:Razor

''Traitor Of The Bogan'' Razor Has betrayed the Bogan,And is now with working with the jedi.

Home Planet:Coruscant

Current Location:Jedi Temple On Coruscant

Faction:N/A

Rank:N/A till given

Skills/Forms:He Has Finished His Training in Shi-Cho Long Ago At The Jedi Temple. But Is hoping to get A Someone to teach him.and Form Makashi Form II also Soresu Form III.He is skilled in hand to hand combat a martial arts his father invented called Rantur After his name.

Species: Human

Master:N/A

Lightsaber: Curved Handled Saber Yellow Crystled.

Parents & siblings: Mother:Kara Pesanka..Father:Rantur Pesanka'' Twin Brother:Raxus Pesanka

Age:16 years

Gender:Male

Height:6'1'

Weight:154 lbs

Allies:Jedi Order

Enemies:My only enemy is defeating myself

Eyes:Dark forest Green

Hair:Dark Brown,He took after his mother.A small dark Brown Goatee, On his chin.

Skin:White with a small Tan.

Credits:990 ck

Distinguishing Marks:Half his body Recently Burnt,Due to speeder Explosion,Left Leg Broken.

Goals: Reuniting with his brother, and becoming a Jedi leaving the dark side

Force Sensitive:Yes

Strength:He..is slightly strong working out once a week..Yet..But wishes to work on it even more.He does Push up now and then,But not often

Dexterity: Flexible like his brother Raxus..He can twist his body in many ways without feeling any pain.

Constition:Healthy

Intelligence:He is a serious Person..He loves.to that move and speak if they he is is a great thinker..he knows how to get out of many situations due to him reading almost everybook when He was in the jedi temple like his brother Raxus.

Wisdom:Wise when it comes to planning things such as,Missions,.Also When it comes to Hand to Hand combat He knows it all.

Charisma:He is a quiet Person..He loves letting his Actions speak for him.He does not get angry anymore as he finally came back to the light.


Force Powers:Force push,Force Grip,

Strength and Weaknesses:His weakness Is agility, He has trouble doing Chartweels often landing on his head,His Strengths are. Hand To hand Combat,His father was Rantur Pesanka he was very skilled at hand to hand combat A one he made himself named Rantur teaching Razor at a very small age,then as he got older practicing on his own.Also,He Is learning different launguage's one of them being,Twi'leki.

Gear:All black Jedi Robe,Black undertunic,right black glove,Black Jedi boots.

Ship:N/A.For the moment

Pets:N/A

Personality:Very serious person And No longer angry anymore,But he is very smart,.He will hit first ask questions later. He reads books often,If he is given a job he will make sure it gets done.He loves To have conversations with people.

]Bio:Born on the outskirts of coruscant,To his mother:Kara Pesanka And his Father:Rantur Pesanka,He lived a good life at first with his parents and his twin brother Raxus, good meals,Good showers,Fun.

When he turned six as did his twin Brother but Raxus would be sent there the next day today was Rjaden's day. They sent him to the jedi temple,for his training.He Read alot of books,He hardly had any friends,they thought he was weird,He only made one or two friends often sparring with other people sometimes including his brother,He thought about his family all day,mostly missing lessons over it His brother was already in the temple they would play together sometimes and get into trouble but hardly seen each other ever since Razor began to suclude himself, even though they were in the same temple,Until one day He got tragic Knews.

His Parents,Were Killed By a group of ruthless bounty hunter's in the Under Citys of coruscant.He was shocked He could not control his anger,he poured with anger.

He ran away from the temple,stealing a ship,And was never heard from again
,He traveled looking For this dark jedi.or any Master's to teach him.Hoping to Get the skill's of the dark side and destroy His parents killer's even Thinking of a plan, Going to get his brother and bring him to the dark side of the force.

But now He was injured by his former Master, He was saved by a jedi and brought for medication at the Jedi Temple On Coruscant, finally getting a chance to meet with his brother Raxus, he is at peace his is even helping the Jedi in the war thats coming ahead.

Role-plays:Razor's Encounter,Razor Opponent,Razors Training For Revenge,Razor's Edge,
Razors Plan.

Kills:N/A For now

Tournament Matches:N/A[/COLOR]

 

[Ser Gregor]

This isn't happening, unfortunately. We have very straight-forward rules when it comes to new characters; they must start out at Padawan level and go through Role Played training in order to gain strength. The exception is if you have previously had a more powerful Force User and get permission from the Faction Leader.

Since you are a new member, this is certainly not the case.

Firstly, he's 15 years old; he cannot be very strong, at that age the human body is still in the middle of development.

All your stats are 'very good, very strong, very wise, very smart' and your 'only weakness' isn't a weakness at all, it's a character trait.

This character will need a complete re-write before you can use it.

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

IS that better.?

 

[Zen]

IS that better.?

You should take off, Choke, Lightning, And Grip. Till taught by your Teacher.Expending a bit on pertinently wouldn't be to painfully, I know it's just 50 words, But it can go much better, if expended same with weakness and stenghts, That's just my advice.

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

I have done it,

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

Excuse Me Zen.Do you happen to be a Dark jedi by the way?

 

[Zen]

Excuse Me Zen.Do you happen to be a Dark jedi by the way?

Shouldn't Double post, Razor, might be condiment spamming. And I have a Dark Jedi, Yes I do..

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

Sorry about that.Could you perhaps train me with that character..Sir?

 

[Dread]

A spy? You wouldn't need a spy to know about the Bogan, as their a Empire and the Jedi already know about them. lol

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

Thanks,for the advice I've changed it to Recruit.

 

[HK-2E]

Firstly, he's 15 years old; he cannot be very strong, at that age the human body is still in the middle of development.

In regards to the 15 years old limit on strength, one of the most famous bodybuilders in the world had a herculean physique at that age, and I'm pretty sure steroids weren't invented yet.

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

WOw..Weird..

 

[HK-2E]

Raxus do something to ya or something?

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

He..Is my brother..and I want him To join the dark side..and Avenge Are Parents..

 

[HK-2E]

:CIsee
:CStern
:CHappy

Ohhai Raxus

:bitchez

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

Hi.

 

[Mije]

Hahahahhaha said he's a dark master of the bogan, he's only 15 and when it comes to hand to hand combat he knows it all, yet when he tries to do backflips and cartwheels he often lands on his head hahahahahaha what a terrible bogan, you contradict yourself every second sentence ahahah

 

[Mije]

Could you please train me...sir? ahahahahahahhahaha

 

[Rjaden Pesanka]

I would,,but Im a Acolyte,But you Can be my personal assisstant even After the Rude comments.

Either Take the Offer Or Face me In a Death match

 

[Horizon]

Okay gents. Cool it down before an administrator busts up in here.