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NAME: Saeja Kanno
FACTION: Dark Jedi
RANK: Acolyte (Is that the proper word for apprentice?)
SPECIES: Hybrid: Half Human, Half Zabrak
AGE: 17
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5'5
WEIGHT: 120lbs
EYES: Black with Red Irises
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Pale white (but human half has a dark tinge, implying Dark skinned human)
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Crimson Horns in head, forming a triangular formation in the frontal lobe of her skull. Eyes in permanent slits
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Average level strength, but Force enhancement plus ferocity make her dangerous (4/10)
DEXTERITY: Incredibly agile, Force Enhanced abilities make her next to impossible to get a hold of in combat to where only the most dexterous can catch her. (9.5/10)
CONSTITUTION: Average level of health for a Zabrak/Human hybrid along with assistance from the Force to grant her the ability to survive in even the harshest of climates (5/10)
INTELLIGENCE: Not very intelligent, however incredibly street smart and has extensive knowledge of various toxins harmful to living creatures (being a drug addict herself), also knows how to hurt people in various ways (3/10)
WISDOM: Is the farthest thing from wise. She is emotionally a follower and reactionary, always reacting to pain and suffering and not growing on past that. Seeking revenge and living only for revenge, as well as living for simple pleasures of the flesh and body. (2/10)
CHARISMA: She lacks charisma, limited by her psychosis and instability, not many can take her seriously, and her lack of intellect and wisdom leave her as a wicked animal, but as a weapon, not a thinker as such her way with words (her snarky tongue notwithstanding) is equally limited. Pain fueling her rage. However when she needs to, she is highly capable of seducing people as needed. (5.5/10)

FORCE POWERS:
Basic Telekinetic abilities (strong enough to choke people through the Force, but cannot control it outside of a certain range (less than 10 square feet); Enhanced senses; spatial awareness; Force Enhanced physical prowess.

SKILLS:
Skilled lockpicker
Camoflauge artist
Escape artist
Skilled Seductress
Vicious Fighter
Tracking Ability
Survivalist



LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Before her lightsaber was destroyed in combat, she was an expert in Form VI (Juyo). After her defeat, she relies on more conventional weapons like knives and a Blaster until she can build a new lightsaber

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths: Strong Will
Seductive
Lightning Fast
Streetwise
Toxin Expert
Vicious
Relentless
Resilient

Weaknesses: Lack of Intellect
Impulsive
Reckless
Short Tempered

GEAR:
Tattered Dark Jedi Robes (bordering on near nudity were it not for the actual hooded robe, not that she cares); Survival Kit (includes breathalyzer, pop out shelter, ration kit, first aid kit); various knives; hold out blaster; deathsticks

SHIP:
none

PETS:
Last pet she had, she bit its head off.

PERSONALITY:
To best describe Saeja would only need three words: Pain, Pleasure, Psychosis. She is driven by pain which fuels her rage, even to the point of irrationality. Whenever (which is rare) she feels to be in a pleasureable mood, she never gives, she only takes to fill the void in her black soul. In essence she would love nothing more than to kill everything that moves (even friends) and rape their corpses.

BIOGRAPHY:
Abandoned as a child, Saeja was frequently moved around from foster parent to foster parent in the Republic system, all of them mysteriously dying from various causes. As she grew, she developed a taste for violence, taking pleasure from it. As she grew to feel pleasure, she wanted more of it, nothing more, nothing less.

When she was 14, she found love, and for the first time in her life, she turned away from violence. This young man was a former Jedi Padawan who turned away from the order because of differing views in life. Through him, she came to understand she grew an affinity in the Force, learning what she could from him. However one day, across their adventures, he fell in love with another, and moved onto a new life. Feeling distraught and betrayed, she killed him and his new lover, taking his lightsaber, turning the blade red. She felt burned and through that developed an addiction to spice and deathsticks, as well as the need to kill everything and all things related to the Jedi Order, killing Younglings and Initiates whenever she could.

When she was 16, she encountered a young Jedi Apprentice, Taoré Timarick. Not to be taken lightly, this was Saeja's first real challenge. Springing upon him at night as she loved to do, she was shocked at how he was waiting for her, claiming to have sensed her for a while. The battle between them was intense, with her nearly defeating him through sheer ferocity, ending only when he managed to narrowly destroy her lightsaber and knock her out, tying her up in a cave, which only furthered her madness as she spent an entire week just trying to untie herself, save for somehow managing to use the Force to summon her ration kit. Since then, she has ventured to find a Dark Jedi who could teach her more to enhance her powers, so that she can take revenge against the Jedi, and more specifically Taoré Timarick, he being the only man to defeat her.

KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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I like her. Its like she is constantly in the worst possible PMS state the universe has ever known. (she sounds like my ex that way)

2 issues:
1) I understand her fury at her lover... but why would that fury redirect toward the jedi?

2) 2 weeks alone tied up in a cave? I don't care how resilient Zabrak's are... 14 days is a really long time to not eat or drink. I mean, 3 days without water is enough to kill a human. Take 127 hours, He was pinned stuck for 5 days and almost died. I find it a little insane to consider surviving thrice that.
 

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Writer's convenience "sustained by the Force" and just choose that as a power or something akin to that.
 

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Being a survivalist doesn't exactly mean you are hard to kill, it means you can sufficently survive different situations.
 

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Well, Potentially, it all depends on what context you are using survivalist in. Some people use it to describe iron will. The kind of will that makes you crawl ten miles with broken legs and fractures, etc, just to survive. Anyways, this is Star Wars, so a bit of the hard to believe can be believed.
 

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I don't care how iron willed you are, you are going to die in a fatal situation. It is just cheap to say, "Even though you stabbed me through the lung, I'm ridiculously hard to kill because of my iron will."

Furthermore, I don't see anything where a Zabrak is tougher just for being a Zabrak.
 

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I would suggest a proper description of the skills because "ridiculously hard to kill" can be exploited. It even sounds like it already has been. lol

Edit: Also I think he meant he didn't see anything on the wookieepedia page of Zabrak. I can't find anything there either, or maybe I'm just not caring too much right now.
 
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I believe, for the sake of this person's profile, we cease the discussion. The information has be sourced and should be left to the discretion of others now.
 

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I believe, for the sake of this person's profile, we cease the discussion. The information has be sourced and should be left to the discretion of others now.

You're my favorite, even if you're a American. I forgive you for that. :D

Ehm..ehm..anyway, pointless argument is pointless. So, what Fallen said.
 

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Being a survivalist doesn't exactly mean you are hard to kill, it means you can sufficently survive different situations.

To be honest, I got the concept from the Force Unleashed 2, being able to survive on the Force alone for 2 weeks. However, just because she's tied up, didn't mean she couldn't move. She could move enough, feeding off small animals and insects. I mean he wouldn't leave her to die persay, but even so, it didn't exactly help her going batshit crazy even more so than she really is

I like her. Its like she is constantly in the worst possible PMS state the universe has ever known. (she sounds like my ex that way)

2 issues:
1) I understand her fury at her lover... but why would that fury redirect toward the jedi?

2) 2 weeks alone tied up in a cave? I don't care how resilient Zabrak's are... 14 days is a really long time to not eat or drink. I mean, 3 days without water is enough to kill a human. Take 127 hours, He was pinned stuck for 5 days and almost died. I find it a little insane to consider surviving thrice that.

Issues: She hates Jedi in general because her lover was ONCE a Jedi, so she kinda blankets them all the same. He was also the only one to defeat her, so she's turned that to pure vengance. And issue 2 I got the concept from the Force Unleashed 2, being able to survive on the Force alone, but a cave isn't necessarily empty, so (implied, but will be explained, just not in bio) she survived on small animals and insects.

I would suggest a proper description of the skills because "ridiculously hard to kill" can be exploited. It even sounds like it already has been. lol

Edit: Also I think he meant he didn't see anything on the wookieepedia page of Zabrak. I can't find anything there either, or maybe I'm just not caring too much right now.

The whole ridiculously hard to kill bit, comes from my love of DC Comics, and more specifically Batman and the Joker. Like the Clown Prince of Crime, she seems to continously fall into deathlike scenarios (like falling into a smokestack, poisoned, knocked off something at high speeds, blown up in a crash, etc.) where you believe NOBODY can survive that, then somehow, granted a long stretch of time later, there she appears. She's in essence my Jedi's arch-nemesis, and as such I can't really have one without the other.
 
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Issues: She hates Jedi in general because her lover was ONCE a Jedi, so she kinda blankets them all the same. He was also the only one to defeat her, so she's turned that to pure vengance. And issue 2 I got the concept from the Force Unleashed 2, being able to survive on the Force alone, but a cave isn't necessarily empty, so (implied, but will be explained, just not in bio) she survived on small animals and insects.



The whole ridiculously hard to kill bit, comes from my love of DC Comics, and more specifically Batman and the Joker. Like the Clown Prince of Crime, she seems to continously fall into deathlike scenarios (like falling into a smokestack, poisoned, knocked off something at high speeds, blown up in a crash, etc.) where you believe NOBODY can survive that, then somehow, granted a long stretch of time later, there she appears. She's in essence my Jedi's arch-nemesis, and as such I can't really have one without the other.

Ok... I was merely voicing some concerns guys, no need to ague so much.

Now, Taore, I can see the anger at the jedi. She sounds really irrational and could have placed the blame on them for her troubles.

As for the cave... Water is the more important issue here. You can feasibly survive for 2 weeks without food (especially a zabrak). But water would be your main need. I can understand if she had her arms and legs tied, but would it really take 2 weeks to get out of that? I assumed that you meant that he tied her to a stalagmite or something. How exactly did he tie her up?

Hmm... now that I think about it, its not very Jedi-like to leave her to die like that. I would think that he would take her to the Jedi Council, but thats just me.
 

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Ok... I was merely voicing some concerns guys, no need to ague so much.

Now, Taore, I can see the anger at the jedi. She sounds really irrational and could have placed the blame on them for her troubles.

As for the cave... Water is the more important issue here. You can feasibly survive for 2 weeks without food (especially a zabrak). But water would be your main need. I can understand if she had her arms and legs tied, but would it really take 2 weeks to get out of that? I assumed that you meant that he tied her to a stalagmite or something. How exactly did he tie her up?

Hmm... now that I think about it, its not very Jedi-like to leave her to die like that. I would think that he would take her to the Jedi Council, but thats just me.

How do I explain this.... At the time (as explained in bio) He did not have a master, learning his training out of a journal left to him by his father. This was during a two year gap where he leaves his mother behind in search of a Master, to which he gets one (where the rp begins). Hence why he wasn't as good as he currently is, and it was a narrow defeat. Plus, in spite of the research he had, he didn't know all the ins and outs of the Jedi way (nor a connection to the council) and figured it best he tied her up instead of killing her (in case she got out, he'd be long gone at that time). Once again I used the Force Unleashed 2 concept. Starkiller's clone (human) survived with no food or water for 13 days in isolation, so I used that concept as well, but when she got out, you can easily assume what happened next: stole water and supplies, killed people, all that jazz
 

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Why is there a need to go 2 weeks without food or water? Couldn't he have just locked her in a cave, left her with an open wound, or something easier to get over.

Because frankly comparing yourself to who is most likely the most POWERFUL Jedi's more powerful clone is really not helping you against the claims of ridiculousness, overpowered-ness, and mary sue-ness.
 

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Why is there a need to go 2 weeks without food or water? Couldn't he have just locked her in a cave, left her with an open wound, or something easier to get over.

Because frankly comparing yourself to who is most likely the most POWERFUL Jedi's more powerful clone is really not helping you against the claims of ridiculousness, overpowered-ness, and mary sue-ness.

It was a concept I took from it, that doesn't necessarily imply she's god. I mean i've also read and seen several instances where a Force user has survived on the Force alone for long stretches of time, ranging from novels, to fanfics, to videos, to comics. So it's not like it's outrageous, plus she was kinda knocked out for a stint of it, which depending on how hard you get hit, can range anywhere from a few hours to even a few days.
 

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Why is there a need to go 2 weeks without food or water? Couldn't he have just locked her in a cave, left her with an open wound, or something easier to get over.

Because frankly comparing yourself to who is most likely the most POWERFUL Jedi's more powerful clone is really not helping you against the claims of ridiculousness, overpowered-ness, and mary sue-ness.

This.

What are you accomplishing with 2 weeks?

And I always thought that the force unleashed games were kinda OP.
 

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And I always thought that the force unleashed games were kinda OP.

That was the point... to play the most overpowered Jedi who is only beaten when you are not playing him. LOL

Saying that your character just went a day past what the most overpowered Jedi's more overpowered clone's survival time is ridiculous and can be exploited.

Plus saying "ridiculously hard to kill" makes you sound even more op.

Edit: Just because you are knocked out doesn't mean you go into hibernation and survive better. In most cases, the opposite is true.
 

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That was the point... to play the most overpowered Jedi who is only beaten when you are not playing him. LOL

Saying that your character just went a day past what the most overpowered Jedi's more overpowered clone's survival time is ridiculous and can be exploited.

Plus saying "ridiculously hard to kill" makes you sound even more op.

Edit: Just because you are knocked out doesn't mean you go into hibernation and survive better. In most cases, the opposite is true.

If you go back to an earlier post, I explained the notoriously hard to kill bit: It stems from my love of DC Comics and Batman and the Joker. How many times has the Joker fallen into deathlike scenarios (fallen to his death, blown up, left to die, blah blah blah) where you'd think no one can survive, yet somehow (albeit a length of time has passed) they return? Saeja is really created to be my Jedi's arch-nemesis, cause I firmly believe that with every great hero, you need a great villain, that's why I did that gag.
 

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You realize the Joker is from the DC universe and he doesn't die because the author says he doesn't? Just because you love an overpowered ability someone else has, doesn't mean you can have it. The authors literally power plays the Joker. If you are put into one of the situations that Joke didn't die from, YOU will most likely be dead in the same situations. Joker is part of a comic, this is an rpg.
 
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