The character game

[Lotho Minorian]

Likes: This guys is actually pretty solid with a believable set of skills and traits. The fact that he is a reckless sith is in particular my favorite trait of his. MAkes me wonder how he will make use of the dark side.
Dislikes: I usually have a hard time believing so many accomplishments under the belt of a child but to be fair he is nearly an adult not to mention force sensitive. Iunno the age bit always makes me cock my head when its under 25.

Still my only character. Dip the Junker

 

[Sapphire Storm]

Likes: This guys is actually pretty solid with a believable set of skills and traits. The fact that he is a reckless sith is in particular my favorite trait of his. MAkes me wonder how he will make use of the dark side.
Dislikes: I usually have a hard time believing so many accomplishments under the belt of a child but to be fair he is nearly an adult not to mention force sensitive. Iunno the age bit always makes me cock my head when its under 25.

Still my only character. Dip the Junker

Likes: I didn't even know junkers were a race until I saw Dip. He seems like an extremely interesting and unique character and I look forward to seeing where you take him.
Dislikes: I feel like his "Can be convinced of almost any concept he hasn't gained the grasp of" and "Is hard to gain the trust of" weaknesses have the chance of being a little bit contradictory of each other. If his easily convinced nature doesn't apply to those he doesn't trust, feel free to ignore this. I thought it worth mentioning, though.

Let's go with... Arali. I have my own reservations about her profile - I did write it up ages ago - and am curious to see what someone else thinks of her.

 

[Fang.]

Like: well balanced character, well thought out. Manipulative characters are always fun to watch.

Dislike: not much really minor things like how it does not say what her mastery level of her force powers are and stuff like that.


Fang

 

[Tiberius Semper]

Like: The format looks really cool, and I like the clear formatting for his skills, attributes and assets.
Dislike: It seems a huge amount to take in, which is a little daunting at first glance.

All in all a very cool character, and very well written

My only PC... Arok

 

[Latte]

Like: The organization of the information, and the picture of a Hutt from SWTOR whose name escapes me at the moment.
Dislike: The dropdown menu/table for thread log, simply because it looks a little funny, but that's my personal preference. Also, lack of this mysterious literary work in the first post, haha. :P

Misha, if you please.

 

[Cap'n Hobbes]

Like: You used Quicksilver as your fc... anything with qs is badass also you reference ac/dc another +1 to badassery

Dislike: The profile is hard to read on my 3ds :[

Vance

 

[Black Noise]

Like: He's impulsive, I like a Sith that does whatever they feel like and disregards the consequences. Doesn't promote longevity but is an interesting story point.

Dislike: Attacked by a Kath Hound, gets three convenient claw marks down his face that only serve to make him look like a badass. I find it a bit silly tbh.

Konstantine :D I can't remember the last time I updated his CS so have at him!

 

[Minuteman75]

Like: Loved the character development that gone into this guy. He gone a long way from being the Empire's highest general to a defector on the side of the rebels. I especially like how he is an honorable soldier despite his past service to the Empire and yet very much human.

Dislike: The profile on this fellow does need an update to be honest.

Forim

 

[Loco]

Konstantine :D

Dislike: Killed all my doodz, all my base are belong to him :disappoint:

Like, he made a damn fine show of it.

Forim

You already know I like this character, so I'll just get nitpicky about the format instead- there's nothing really wrong with it, but you might think about swapping the opening text to go after the picture and basic info- having the picture at the top would be a bit more eye catching IMHO.




The last of us- Arya, who just got her new profile put up.

 

[Marf]

Like: One seriously badass chick, the personality and picture are fantastic and I dare say she has a lot in common with Satsuki.
Dislike: The only thing I really dislike is how overused that template is. It's a nice template no doubt, I'm just getting a bit sick of seeing it.

Satsuki

 

[Vexillar]

Like: Her. Voice. Yesssss. Very fitting, it's the one thing I constantly remember about the profile.
Dislike: I never liked that boobs of steel trope, lol.


Viole. (Profile needs an updating here and there for sure)

 

[TheSilentWind]

Like: I am pretty sure that your the only Mirakula Sith or at least one of the few so that is quite unique. Another unique thing about Viole is him speaking in a third person. I like the stats section as you add a bit of his personal and stats and that's a good mix. I also like that line "He couldn't hit the broad side of Aldeeran.". The Forte and Inadequacies section is a nice touch as well.

Dislike: Update your profile.

Lets go with Korra.

 

[Rector_Ras]

Like: I tend to like seeing the young charecters, they have so much open and so much that can happen that story wise I think can turn out really fun.

Dislike: although young I still think the Bio could be a bit longer as well as the personality. Its hard to really get a picture and feeling of who she is without length.

Review my new guy Andrew please!

 

[Cap'n Hobbes]

Like: Clean profile and easy to read. He doesn't seem too outrageous (granted I haven't read his bio fully yet...)

Dislike: His personality seems alittle too clean but that could just be me...

Vance

 

[Tiberius Semper]

Like: The personality is interesting as well as the biography
Disike: The whole thing looks far too plain to catch my interest more then a quick glance over. The formatting is very dry and "wall of texty" that makes it hard to read.

Arok

 

[Rector_Ras]

Like: he isn't just a boss guy who tells people what to do, he actually knows things and has an education in math and science.
Dislike: I have never been a fan of Huts in an RP environment. I personally see little they can actually do ability and story wise as a PC

Andrew again, need as much feedback as I can for him still

 

[Tiberius Semper]

Like: he isn't just a boss guy who tells people what to do, he actually knows things and has an education in math and science.
Dislike: I have never been a fan of Huts in an RP environment. I personally see little they can actually do ability and story wise as a PC

Andrew again, need as much feedback as I can for him still

Well, that's the whole point of me making him. I find, that a lot of people have "killer/badass/macho man" complex and feel that they must be this combat oriented character who runs around shooting things/flying shit/doing force stuff/etc...

And that's not true - there is the corporate side of life, where one can manage billions without lifting a blaster, or commit crimes from the safety of their homes. They could even act as fences, or information brokers dispensing knowledge to the highest bidder. After all - secrets are power...
They are the quintessential mastermind so to speak, and are those who act behind the scenes more then run around doing them

 

[Rector_Ras]

Well, that's the whole point of me making him. I find, that a lot of people have "killer/badass/macho man" complex and feel that they must be this combat oriented character who runs around shooting things/flying shit/doing force stuff/etc...

And that's not true - there is the corporate side of life, where one can manage billions without lifting a blaster, or commit crimes from the safety of their homes. They could even act as fences, or information brokers dispensing knowledge to the highest bidder. After all - secrets are power...
They are the quintessential mastermind so to speak, and are those who act behind the scenes more then run around doing them

aye I know what you mean, a guy who isn't up in the front lines. That's pretty much what my new guy is XD I just don't see how to work it with a hut as it takes that to an extreme but I do commend you for trying. No one can take that away and Im not trying to say its a bad idea and you shouldn't do it, its just how I feel on him :)

Now lets keep this on track huh? I think I had Andrew up for review

 

[Tiberius Semper]

Like: everything, he's a well balanced character with good stats for his age as well as a very well developed biography and personality. Love the setup, it's eye catching, informative, engaging and fun. Good work!!!
Dislike: the bio is a tad long, maybe have a short version and then in spoilers the full length?

Who else if not the Hutt himself in all his glory, and I'll get to that damn intro post. One day...

 

[Marf]

Like: I would never play one myself, but I am quite fond of decadent, greedy Hutts. Arok is one such Hutt.
Dislike: As nice as it is, I'm sick to death of seeing that template. I also greatly dislike when a character's personality is described entirely with tropes and alignments instead of being originally written.

Satoryu