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©razy Man

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Gutterson

Like:The IM Conversation xD
Dislike:Nothing all around good character

Shenzai
 

YOLT

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Likes: KITTY, the story,code of honor,sword
Dislikes: Isn't he kind of fat? O.o and the skills are lacking
 

©razy Man

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You forgot to put a person. And no O.o muscle weighs more than fat and it's more like he's all muscle no fat whatsoever.
 

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I got tired of saying "Just pick one" so I didn't put anything :)

I understand muscle weighs more than fat. But over 400 lbs at only 6'0...that just seemed like a lot to me, even with muscle taken into account.

Ikol or Ginsara
 

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Ikol

Like: It's Loki!
Dislike: I was going to make a Sith and use Loki :p

Satoryu
 

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Hehehe beat you to it :p

Like: The whole "possessed thing" is pretty cool
Dislike: I don't understand how her being Asian is a distinguishing feature?

Sith is a language? Huh I learned something new

Ikol or Ginsara
 

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Ginsara since I've said what I've already wanted to say about Ikol

Like: Everything and that you got rid of the slave just for me :D Even though you won't admit it :p
Dislike: Nothing. She's a Queen that helps her people to the best she can do, not much not to like.

Aniad
 

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Like: He's as psychotic as my characters, he's a sith so ,duh, he's awesome
Dislike: The tattoo that says Sith

Pick a character any character! :D
 

Silver Cutlass

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Valen
Like: I've RP'ed with him!
Dislike: Nothing. Had fun RP'ing with another serial killer :D

Pick a character, I don't care which.
 

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Myra

Like: Everything
Dislike: That gal in the pic is hot but I have no clue who she is

Pick one

Oh and is there any chance we can do another RP soon. Cause I'm bored and that was FUN!
 

©razy Man

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Kara

Like: The whole shadow thing you rp. I don't remember the title you give her.
Dislike: You have yet to answer to our rp :p Other than that nothing xD

Shenzai

Edit: I'm leaving before I start getting ninja'd like yesterday...
 

The Derp of Hooves

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Like: Kushari, chapter approach to bio, and pretty much every thing xD

Dislike: you copied my chapter approach to bios :CFuu lol jk i really don't have much to dislike about it :3

Yuunda
 

Tarl Drazin

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Like: Gotta love a detailed background. It explains why your character is the way he is, and that's worthy of respect.

Dislike: I dislike force-users in general. Honestly, though, I think you've handled your character's journey to demigodhood pretty well.

Tarl Drazin
 

Gavin

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Like: Bounty Hunter, not a brutish fool, I really liked how you titled the traits and stuff.

Dislike: Nothing that I can point out.

Burai Valisi
 
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The Derp of Hooves

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Like: First time I've seen that species here :3 cool character

Dislike: the profile seems a little lacking in some areas.... the bio could use expanding perhaps...

I'm gonna change things up here and show you a preview of my new character for the time skip, hope you like:

NAME: Snowarr
FACTION: Mando
RANK: n/a
SPECIES: Wookiee
Home World: Kashyyk
AGE: 240
GENDER: male
HEIGHT: 2.1 meters
WEIGHT: 350lbs
EYES: Dark Blue
HAIR: dark brown, tinged red
SKIN: covered in fur
CREDITS: n/a
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Uhm… he’s a wookiee?
FORCE SENSITIVE: unknown to him but yes

STRENGTH: He’s strong as a wookiee… because he is one needless to say years of hunting in the shadow lands have honed his strength to that above an average wookiee.
DEXTERITY: Life on Kashyyk climbing up and down wroshyr trees has made him quite agile.
CONSTITUTION: Snowarr is in excellent physical condition.
INTELLIGENCE: Snowarr has had not had what most sentients would call a normal education, but he was taught in traditional Wookiee fashion.
WISDOM: Not the wisest of his people, he has been known to rip peoples arms off their sockets when things don’t go his way also he has a natural sense of curiosity, often getting himself into more trouble then necessary.
CHARISMA: Snowarr is a gentle wook despite his reputation as a hunter on his home world.

FORCE POWERS:
N/A However, when he goes into a wookiee rage, he exhibits astonishing strength, even for a wookiee. But afterwords he becomes exhausted to the point of passing out and takes a few days to recover. (Force rage)

SKILLS:
Hunting
Bowcaster marksman
Climbing
Ryyk blade combat

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
N/A though it closely resembles a two handed variant of Djem So.
1
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+Wookiee strength
+Loyalty
+Height
+Intimidating
+/-Wookiee rage
-Inability to speak basic
-Often viewed as a ‘Walking carpet’
-Was once a slave
-Overly curious

GEAR:
Bow Caster
Belt and sheaths for his Ryyk blades made from the fibers of a syren plant during his hrrtayyk
Twin Ryyk Kerarthorr blades

SHIP:
n/a

DROIDS:
n/a

PETS:
n/a

PERSONALITY:
One word can describe Snowarr perfectly, loyalty. He is a Wookiee of his word, and will not break it for anything. Normally a gentle and kind wook, Snowarr is a fierce hunter having spent most of his time in the shadowlands of Kashyyk. Snowarr has also been known to be somewhat of a child, when things don’t go his way he’ll start to go into a wookiee rage and has been known to rip peoples arms off their sockets. When Snowarr is in one of his rages he loses all sense of himself and has been known to attack friend and foe alike. Besides that he is normally very agreeable, easy going and can get along with just about any species. Except of course Trandoshans, which are the ancestral enemy of the Wookiee. When he meets one, without hesitation, without consulting anyone else he will attempt to kill the beast. He views them as nothing more than savages and hunts them as he would a madclaw. Snowarr, as his name would suggest, has an insatiable sense of curiosity.

BIOGRAPHY:
Snowarr was born on Kashyyk in Rwookrrorro and raised as the middle child in a litter of five wookiee pups. Being the middle child wasn’t always that great, his younger brothers and sisters always got the better treatment, while his older siblings got the best food and equipment. He had to work had to prove himself worthy and during his hrrtayyk, or test of ascension, he did. Not only did he gather the silk fibers from the Syren plant that was traditional in passing his hrrtayyk from the shadow lands, he brought back the entire plant.

For years after his rite of passage, he lived as a regular Wookiee in Rwookrrorro city, going day to day making his living as a hunter in the shadowlands. This was until the Sith came and ruined it all. His family gone, either dead or enslaved, he attempted to flee himself but to no avail. He was taken and despite a great struggle, during which he had killed several of his captors even resorting to using his claws to do so, a huge mistake on his part and one that he swore never to tell anyone, he was ultimately taken captured and turned into a slave.

His life as a slave tore down his will and his spirit. He was often deported to worlds devoid of any sort of greenery, worlds such as Taris, or Tatooine. He longed to go back to Kashyyk to feel the Wroshyr trees beneath his paws, but it wasn’t until he was saved by a certain man. A man clad in armor a t shape visor on his helmet had hunted and killed his owner, freeing him from his life of slavery.

Without hesitation, he swore a life debt to the man as the deepest parts of Wookiee culture forced him to. From then on he was a loyal follower of the Mandolorian clan of Marren, more specifically the man who saved him, Elliot Marren. Being a Wookiee, several exceptions were made for him as he joined the mandolorians. Because of his inability to speak any language than Shyriiwook, he only had to learn how to understand Mando’a also a special set of armor was made for him. As a Wookiee, Snowarr refused to wear anything that would cover his fur, but the Resol’nare clearly stated for its use. Thus he was made a brassard with the clan insignia on the shoulder. It was armor, but it also fit comfortably to Snowarr.

With his life now as a Mandolorian, he was free at last. He would do his duty as dictated, but one thing was still on his mind. Since his enslavement, he had not heard of what happened to the rest of his family. He would do all he could to find them and free them if they were still alive. Finding four siblings and his mother and father however, would be a daunting task as he had also had his new loyalties to contend with.

KILLS:
N/a

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
N/a

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/a

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/a

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/a
 

Wanderer

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Like: The mando wookie XD

Dislike: I don't know why, but it somehow confuses me XD

For your review, the unlocked and now approved, Kane De'Lanfant. Link in sig :p also check out his future faction's flag XD
 

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Like: Everything this seems promising
Dislike: Nothing but how is his being a former slave a weakness?

I died once.

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But I’m obviously not dead now.

Well I was only dead for a minute while under the knife. I don’t remember a lot about those ten days I spent in bacta.

But I remember the days before…

I almost died because someone fell in love with me. Nobody falls in love with me. I fall in love with no one.

And the world goes round.

I was sent in to infiltrate the Sith. I did my research and found out about the girl. I decided to take a risk and gained her trust. She even agreed when I asked to tag along when she went home to Korriban.

I didn’t want to meet her parents…

She was in love though. And she wanted to introduce me to them though. I meant to get to Korriban and say good-bye to her, so I could go infiltrate. I saw the look her mother gave me. I needed to get out of there…then the father came in.

That was the death of me.


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My name’s Hunter Indi Millard
I’m a Jedi
I am Human
I’m 29 Standard years old
I’m 6 feet or 2 meters tall
I have brown hair and green eyes


I’m pretty fit if I say so myself, gotta be in this world
It’s the other guy who you should worry about (but I can take my fair share of blows)
Intelligence? I’ve got common sense, which is more than some people (but I know my stuff)
Wisdom? I ain’t old!! (Um, come back later)
You have a way with words…(and so do I)



I’d say I’m not really sociable. I prefer to get the job done instead of wasting time on excessive talking. If it’s not necessary I don’t do it, but that doesn’t mean I can’t go the extra mile. People don’t usually approach me; I’m kinda gruff and sarcastic at times. Well all the time…


I don’t know where I could be considered born. I was born on a freighter somewhere between Naboo and Coruscant. I spent most of my childhood bouncing from planet to planet with my parents and brothers and sisters. There were five of us. I was the third.
My dad ran a good’s transportation service, which was mostly legal. When my Force Sensitivity was discovered while docked on Empress Teta by a master there, I was just kind of…left.
But no hard feelings right? It was for the best.

I was about ten when I began Initiate training at Empress Teta. At thirteen I became a Padawan, and four years later I was sent on that fateful mission.

Now I must mention here that I believe that Sith’s mother is or was not a Sith. She was too kind. That look was a warning and pitying. When the father took the girl off her mother drug me picked me up, unconscious, and took me down to the spaceport. She sent me off on a medical transport to Tython.

It was on that transport I went under the knife and died. Once they made sure I was stable and all they put me in bacta for the other ten days until we reached Tython. I now sport a wicked scar that didn’t completely heal. It’s fading though.​

Edit: NINJA'D >.>
 

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Like: That first line.
Dislike: 'You cannot smoke a cigar with that haircut.

T'Tack.

EDIT:

Dam, ninja'd.
 

The Derp of Hooves

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fak ninjas lol...

@T'Tack: Like: He's a whipped

Dislike: he's taller than my wookiee >~>

I'll do my preview again:

NAME: Snowarr
FACTION: Mando
RANK: n/a
SPECIES: Wookiee
Home World: Kashyyk
AGE: 240
GENDER: male
HEIGHT: 2.1 meters
WEIGHT: 350lbs
EYES: Dark Blue
HAIR: dark brown, tinged red
SKIN: covered in fur
CREDITS: n/a
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Uhm… he’s a wookiee?
FORCE SENSITIVE: unknown to him but yes

STRENGTH: He’s strong as a wookiee… because he is one needless to say years of hunting in the shadow lands have honed his strength to that above an average wookiee.
DEXTERITY: Life on Kashyyk climbing up and down wroshyr trees has made him quite agile.
CONSTITUTION: Snowarr is in excellent physical condition.
INTELLIGENCE: Snowarr has had not had what most sentients would call a normal education, but he was taught in traditional Wookiee fashion.
WISDOM: Not the wisest of his people, he has been known to rip peoples arms off their sockets when things don’t go his way also he has a natural sense of curiosity, often getting himself into more trouble then necessary.
CHARISMA: Snowarr is a gentle wook despite his reputation as a hunter on his home world.

FORCE POWERS:
N/A However, when he goes into a wookiee rage, he exhibits astonishing strength, even for a wookiee. But afterwords he becomes exhausted to the point of passing out and takes a few days to recover. (Force rage)

SKILLS:
Hunting
Bowcaster marksman
Climbing
Ryyk blade combat

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
N/A though it closely resembles a two handed variant of Djem So.
1
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+Wookiee strength
+Loyalty
+Height
+Intimidating
+/-Wookiee rage
-Inability to speak basic
-Often viewed as a ‘Walking carpet’
-Was once a slave
-Overly curious

GEAR:
Bow Caster
Belt and sheaths for his Ryyk blades made from the fibers of a syren plant during his hrrtayyk
Twin Ryyk Kerarthorr blades

SHIP:
n/a

DROIDS:
n/a

PETS:
n/a

PERSONALITY:
One word can describe Snowarr perfectly, loyalty. He is a Wookiee of his word, and will not break it for anything. Normally a gentle and kind wook, Snowarr is a fierce hunter having spent most of his time in the shadowlands of Kashyyk. Snowarr has also been known to be somewhat of a child, when things don’t go his way he’ll start to go into a wookiee rage and has been known to rip peoples arms off their sockets. When Snowarr is in one of his rages he loses all sense of himself and has been known to attack friend and foe alike. Besides that he is normally very agreeable, easy going and can get along with just about any species. Except of course Trandoshans, which are the ancestral enemy of the Wookiee. When he meets one, without hesitation, without consulting anyone else he will attempt to kill the beast. He views them as nothing more than savages and hunts them as he would a madclaw. Snowarr, as his name would suggest, has an insatiable sense of curiosity.

BIOGRAPHY:
Snowarr was born on Kashyyk in Rwookrrorro and raised as the middle child in a litter of five wookiee pups. Being the middle child wasn’t always that great, his younger brothers and sisters always got the better treatment, while his older siblings got the best food and equipment. He had to work had to prove himself worthy and during his hrrtayyk, or test of ascension, he did. Not only did he gather the silk fibers from the Syren plant that was traditional in passing his hrrtayyk from the shadow lands, he brought back the entire plant.

For years after his rite of passage, he lived as a regular Wookiee in Rwookrrorro city, going day to day making his living as a hunter in the shadowlands. This was until the Sith came and ruined it all. His family gone, either dead or enslaved, he attempted to flee himself but to no avail. He was taken and despite a great struggle, during which he had killed several of his captors even resorting to using his claws to do so, a huge mistake on his part and one that he swore never to tell anyone, he was ultimately taken captured and turned into a slave.

His life as a slave tore down his will and his spirit. He was often deported to worlds devoid of any sort of greenery, worlds such as Taris, or Tatooine. He longed to go back to Kashyyk to feel the Wroshyr trees beneath his paws, but it wasn’t until he was saved by a certain man. A man clad in armor a t shape visor on his helmet had hunted and killed his owner, freeing him from his life of slavery.

Without hesitation, he swore a life debt to the man as the deepest parts of Wookiee culture forced him to. From then on he was a loyal follower of the Mandolorian clan of Marren, more specifically the man who saved him, Elliot Marren. Being a Wookiee, several exceptions were made for him as he joined the mandolorians. Because of his inability to speak any language than Shyriiwook, he only had to learn how to understand Mando’a also a special set of armor was made for him. As a Wookiee, Snowarr refused to wear anything that would cover his fur, but the Resol’nare clearly stated for its use. Thus he was made a brassard with the clan insignia on the shoulder. It was armor, but it also fit comfortably to Snowarr.

With his life now as a Mandolorian, he was free at last. He would do his duty as dictated, but one thing was still on his mind. Since his enslavement, he had not heard of what happened to the rest of his family. He would do all he could to find them and free them if they were still alive. Finding four siblings and his mother and father however, would be a daunting task as he had also had his new loyalties to contend with.

KILLS:
N/a

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
N/a

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/a

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/a

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/a
 

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Like: Mando Wookiee! :O

Dislike: Nothing, except I got ninja'd and no opinions on Kane lol

So Kane again, link in sig!
 
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