The character game

[Marf]

Like: The biography is very clear and well-written, and he is a likeable character. My Satsuki is an honourable warrior too.

Dislike: IT'S NOT PRETTY.

Mya-mya!

 

[Befallen]

A child Sith! You almost never see this being RP'd. Plus, you did a very good job of making her a believable little girl. I found her profile and bio to be refreshing!

Xora Rzardi!

 

[The Derp of Hooves]

Like: props to using player made stuffs and being non fs ^-^ cool concept and nicely laid out
Dislike: no picture and also i wanna pronounce her name as 'zora' for some reason....

Thresa

 

[Mr. Mischief]

Like:

You have obviously thought about your character design in great length, as evidenced by the awesome bio and her more "traditional" gladiator feel that seems to come through.​

Dislike:

Not much I'm seeing that can be put here.​

Savan Rhodu, if you wouldn't mind.

 

[Forsaken Archon]

Like: Seems like an interesting PC. While arrogance is common for Sith his disgust for other species gives him some character.

Dislike: Would have liked to see more bio personally. Another personality quirk might make him seem like less of a standard Sith.

Nerus prease.

 

[PsychicMoneyMan]

Like: He has very balanced stats, not something you see a lot here.

Dislike: Resorts to the "Having no Parents" cliché, which I hate.

Listeri Dalane

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?57147-Indie-Listeri-Dalane

 

[EnderM5]

LIKE: Very... believable? Good flow of story in bio.
DISLIKE: Scars on face cliche. (Although you could have gone worse and made them in some specific shape. :D

Tran, please.

 

[Logan]

Likes: Don't see many Chiss around anymore. Liked his bio too.

Dislike: It's not pretty! D:


Eisley Halifax. (pink block in sig)

 

[Fang.]

Like: Very nicely writtten encompassed her bio and personality beattifully.

Dislike: Nothing, except I want that skull she is holding to be part of her story.


Vandheer Tarwae

 

[Mr. Mischief]

Like: I like the character concept, his name, picture, and the fact that it seems as though you really tried to portray his personality well within his backstory.

Dislike: While I like the character concept, I think that it is also a hindrance to him as a user of the Force. As they play a pretty significant role in its utilization. Besides that, solid.

Savan Rhodu or Rengar your pick.

 

[Marf]

Savan

Like: He's a ****ing Ziosti Massassi.

Dislike: That template, well not the template itself, just that everyone uses it. I also feel that the biography is way too short, what was his life like before his tribe was butchered? I also dislike the cliche of Purebloods being racist snobs.

Mya

 

[Fang.]

Like:A fun and cheeky character outside what most picture as a norm for the Sith

Dislike : nothing



Fang or Vandheer, take your pick

 

[Marf]

Vandheer.

Like: He's a brutal, vicious, badass.

Dislike: He's a brutal, vicious badass with no humanity and very little complexity. Sith, according to my tastes, are more interesting and likeable when they have normal human traits and issues, alongside the stereotypical badass ones. I'm a huge sucker for Sith who still retain certain degrees of humanity and compassion, who mess up, goof around and break down emotionally. I also dislike how he behaves the way he does because he was born like that, I think that's a really boring excuse and prevents an interesting, detailed back story of how his experiences could have shaped who he is. It's also rather comical that he behaves remorseless and badass when he is only an Acolyte in his early 20's, I have a pet peeve for Acolytes behaving like Lords, especially when they are young.

Soren

 

[Saul Perth]

Likes: Double-bladed lightsabers are sexy, those pictures are really nice, the bio was well written and formatted.

Dislikes: Double-bladed lightsabers are impractical, his weight of 130 puts him AT LEAST 40 pounds below what he looks in those awesome pictures, and he wears makeup.

Saul Perth

 

[Minuteman75]

Likes: The way you have this character's info organized is impressive. Plus I love how this guy had transform from a Jedi to a Rebel commander.

Dislike: The titles of the RP threads could be shown better, but other than that I think this fellow is awesome!

Forim Viridux

 

[The Derp of Hooves]

Like: nice character ^-^ you don't see many duros around here... at least i don't lol...

Dislike: mmmm not much other than the profile could be prettied up a little... but then again i'm not one to speak so yeah ^-^

Mire

 

[Saul Perth]

Like: Seems balanced, or even underpowered, as far as most starting characters go, but for a 13 year old who's only had unofficial training, seems about right.

Dislike: You left the gear section blank, and I get she's small, but to me 75 pounds seems REALLY small, but I'm not really sure if I'm right on that or not.

Sabek

 

[Cassanova]

Sabek

I'm a big fan of Trandoshans from way back - one of my earliest characters was a Trandoshan, actually (Link). I like the biography alot, actually - its a little basic, but it tells you the full story, really. But one thing i do like is the nod to traditional Trando culture and the honour blades.
Well done, Saul!

Jack Tamblyn

 

[Skyway]

Like: He in a way a hutt in a human body though more down to earth *cough*.
Dislike: There not much besides his business.

Zorro Feather "and his little droid"

 

[Toska]

You didn't write much about the character, so I can only say so much. ):

He's a Hapan though; I like pretty-boy Hapans. They are fun, especially considering their matriarchal society. I enjoyed your use of the old Hapan pirate culture, which directly conflicts with their standard. It's old-school Hapan fun. Unfortunately, I don't know much about the character himself. Don't have a grasp of what he's like or how you play him from the profile.

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Constantine, if you please.