Noire
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Corellia. Coronet City.
1,016 ABY
Caden Ansgar rubbed his eyes with the sleeve of his shirt as he scrubbed the last of the black grime off of the floor. He made especially sure to avoid the long scar running down his face as he did so. It still stung as if it was a fresh cut, and served as a constant reminder of what had happened just the day before. A day that he would have preferred to erase from his memory altogether, but he knew in his mind that that wasn't at all possible. He jumped to his feet and tossed the rag onto the counter, placing his hands on his hips as he looked over his work. The shop was spotless now, but he knew by the time he would return tomorrow it would have regressed back to its state of utter filth. That was the only thing that kept him from admiring the result of his labor. But that wasn't even the worst part about it; Caden never received any credits for all of his hard work. He was a slave to both this meaningless and menial job and to his father's every whim. It was his father, Korto Ansgar, who had insisted that Caden help "old Vado'lan" with the upkeep of his shop every day. He had said the hard work made for, "a good and honest man" but Caden didn't believe one bit of that nonsense.
He wasn't planning on being just "a good and honest man" just as he wasn't planning on being on Corellia much longer. He would be a powerful Jedi, one day. He'd have his own lightsaber and go off and fight in the war, one day. He would save the galaxy, single handed, and become the hero, the savior, that everyone now was waiting for. He just knew it. And in his mind, there was no denying his destiny. The thought alone brought a wide smile to his face but he quickly erased all signs of it and huffed loudly as he observed Vado'lan, a dark blue Twi'lek, slowly hobble from the back of the shop. The store itself was no bigger than any other small-time shop in the Blue Sector, hardly large enough to fit ten people inside, but the old Twi'lek treated it as if it was the largest bazaar on the planet. Vado'lan stopped and looked around the shop for a brief moment before nodding his head. To Caden, it seemed as if he barely cared at all.
"You did alright. Good enough, Caden." Vado'lan said simply, shaking his cane about. "Close down the shop for me, will you boy?" He asked. Then he turned and began to walk back toward the rear of the shop without another word. Caden was taken aback. That was all? Caden shook his head immediately, his eyes narrowing and his hands clenching into tight fists as the anger welled up inside of him. His arms ached, his legs were sore, his eyes stung, and his body was tired from another hard day's work while Vado'lan had done nothing for hours on end, hadn't even made one sale, and yet he had the audacity to say that Caden had done just good enough? Caden wanted to bite his tongue and keep his thoughts to himself. He didn't want to say anything that he would regret later, but the words had already formed themselves and were demanding to be said aloud. And in a voice Caden didn't recognize, he spoke, loudly.
"Good enough? Your worthless shop is spotless! I'm always the only one working and you never do anything. And yet, all you can say is good enough?" Caden shouted. Vado'lan simply halted, keeping his back turned to Caden, and exhaled very loudly. Caden didn't know how, but he could tell that Vado'lan had suddenly become...saddened. Caden's shoulders slumped and he went still for a moment as it struck him just how frail Vado was, truly, and how harsh his own words had been. He knew at the back of his mind that Vado'lan had no chance of keeping the shop up alone and that Caden was his only hope of doing so. Suddenly the young boy felt very, very stupid and immature. His heart sank and he drew a very sharp breath into himself, already imagining what his father might say, and directed his eyes to the floor. What was I thinking? A Jedi would never act like that. "I didn't - "
"I know, my boy." Vado'lan said, interrupting Caden's apology, and turning around and offering a weak smile. Despite his grin, Caden still could tell the old Twi'lek had been wounded by his outburst.
"Korto is a tough one," Vado'lan continued, "and sometimes you just have to let your anger and frustration out. Old Vado does the same, every so often. The key is, not allowing it to control you. Understand my boy? Now, you better get home before it gets dark." Caden quickly nodded, glad that he wasn't in any serious trouble, and yelled out a goodbye to the Twi'lek before grabbing his bag and slinging it over his shoulder. Caden rushed over to the control box and powered off the lights in the store, so everyone would know that the "Krayt & Katarn" was officially closed for the night, and then stepped outside of the shop. Vado never failed to warn him about getting home before it got dark outside. Sometimes, Caden thought that the old man might truly care for his safety. Other times, Caden figured Vado was probably only worried about what would happen to his shop should Caden be injured and unable to help him out any longer. Despite the fact that Caden was only thirteen years old and wore soot-stained rags for a living, his chances of being mugged weren't lowered in the slightest. On this part on Corellia, there lived some truly desperate beings.
The Blue Sector of Coronet City was infamous for being the rough part of town and yet it always seemed to attract the most off-worlders. Most of the poorer residents of Coronet lived here as well, Caden being one of them. He didn't mind that much, though. He had a far better life here than he would have ever had back on Nar Shaddaa. His eyes roamed the streets and he observed every alien creature in various alleyways bargaining and making shady deals with one another. They spoke loudly at times, angrily too, often in languages Caden couldn't even begin to understand, and sometimes blasters were pulled from the depths of their jackets. Those were the times that Caden would run as fast as his legs could take him. But the next day he was always back again, observing. It was all so...fascinating. Since as long as he could remember Caden had been intrigued in the inner-workings of the criminal underworld. Not that he was at all interested in engaging in such activity himself, but he was simply curious about it. "Too curious", his father would say. With that final thought, he turned away from the shop and started off towards home.
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