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@Johnnysaurus Rex well if your going to be giving advice think my character should get a boast in power? If not I understand just curious?
 

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I thought your character was probably the best off. Powerful and interesting ability that, to me, doesn't seem overtly so.

EDIT: Kibagami has let Storm Crow take his slot. He will now be joining us.
 

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@Johnnysaurus Rex would it be too much to add that later once more training and shit can make like wood clones requiring him to be close?
 

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I thought your character was probably the best off. Powerful and interesting ability that, to me, doesn't seem overtly so.

EDIT: Kibagami has let Storm Crow take his slot. He will now be joining us.

Do you have any thoughts concerning mine? I tried to make it as unique as I could for a teleporter. I would love feedback! I don't want to remove the mark thing, and I don't want to remove the energy thing. Anything else is subject to suggestion.

EDIT: NEVERMIND I just saw that you suggested increasing power. I will have some fun. ;)
 
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Do you have any thoughts concerning mine? I tried to make it as unique as I could for a teleporter. I would love feedback! I don't want to remove the mark thing, and I don't want to remove the energy thing. Anything else is subject to suggestion.

I mean, your guy probably has the weakest ability of them all. Since the team will most likely be going new places all the time he largely loses out on his teleporting ability. That just means that most of the time he's going to be a guy who can punch and dodge real fast. Which hey, those types have existed on teams forever and are still useful.
 

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I mean, your guy probably has the weakest ability of them all. Since the team will most likely be going new places all the time he largely loses out on his teleporting ability. That just means that most of the time he's going to be a guy who can punch and dodge real fast. Which hey, those types have existed on teams forever and are still useful.

I will fix. I just figured we weren't going to make godly individuals.
 

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I will fix. I just figured we weren't going to make godly individuals.

As I said, there is nothing wrong with your powerset. Look at your Batmans and Hawkeyes of the comicbook world. You don't need to hurl galaxies or rewrite reality in order to be an effective hero.

I didn't mean to imply you need to change things.
 

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As I said, there is nothing wrong with your powerset. Look at your Batmans and Hawkeyes of the comicbook world. You don't need to hurl galaxies or rewrite reality in order to be an effective hero.

I didn't mean to imply you need to change things.
Oh! Don't worry you didn't! I was just playing! Do not worry at all. I have no problems making him more OP. I have some ideas that will be nice. ;) TECHNICALLY that is the HEAVILY nerfed version. I had a original draft.
 

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Well let's not go OP, but yeah if you feel you want to up his powers then go ahead. I just didn't want you to feel pressured to make your character more powerful if you wanted him to just be a really competent fighter with limited teleporting abilities. As I said there are a lot of mainstay characters with even less power than that who can do really cool things or buff those abilities with skills other than mutant powers. Say if he put his marks on bullets. You fire the bullet and can teleport yourself across a roomand then just shoot someone in the back.
 

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Well let's not go OP, but yeah if you feel you want to up his powers then go ahead. I just didn't want you to feel pressured to make your character more powerful if you wanted him to just be a really competent fighter with limited teleporting abilities. As I said there are a lot of mainstay characters with even less power than that who can do really cool things or buff those abilities with skills other than mutant powers. Say if he put his marks on bullets. You fire the bullet and can teleport yourself across a roomand then just shoot someone in the back.

Hehe. That's funny since I got the idea from Minato Namikaze, and he was capable of killing 50 enemies in a few seconds because he scattered marked knives across a field and just teleported around.
 

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@Proleptic hey man your character is really cool honestly the transfer of energy to the gems don't need to be bad. But honestly I would think any objects can contain the energy just a suggestion
 

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@Proleptic hey man your character is really cool honestly the transfer of energy to the gems don't need to be bad. But honestly I would think any objects can contain the energy just a suggestion

Thanks! I really liked yours too, and I decided to kinda model mine off yours in the way that he has multiple powers that he has to learn to control properly. I gave Ronan several now with plenty of potential for growth! You should go check it out now. If you guys think it is too OP let me know!
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@Proleptic i felt it was better when the transportation was based off the marks though yes it really limits your character it makes it more interesting and allows your character to be more well rounded. Literally that's the most critisms I have, since I feel your character now is really well off and has great potential. Good luck man hopefully both of our characters can make some interesting stories
 

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I think people have forgotten just how incredibly OP some members of the X-Men are. Magneto can open wormholes and create solar system wide poweroutage through an EMP. Storms lightning can crack tectonic plates( which she then promptly puts back together). Charles Xavier can attack across galaxies with his mind. Heck, Iceman has been said to be able to freeze the entire planet if he wanted to. It's kinda crazy.

But then there's Gambit :p
 

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I think people have forgotten just how incredibly OP some members of the X-Men are. Magneto can open wormholes and create solar system wide poweroutage through an EMP. Storms lightning can crack tectonic plates( which she then promptly puts back together). Charles Xavier can attack across galaxies with his mind. Heck, Iceman has been said to be able to freeze the entire planet if he wanted to. It's kinda crazy.

But then there's Gambit :p
Yeah I definitely didn't think of that. lol. I think I am still in the mindset that is me trying to get my species approved. I mad a species that was physically stronger than humans as well as having empathetic ability, and Dmitri through it on the ground so hard I have had to nerf it three times, and he hasn't approved it yet.
 

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@Proleptic i felt it was better when the transportation was based off the marks though yes it really limits your character it makes it more interesting and allows your character to be more well rounded. Literally that's the most critisms I have, since I feel your character now is really well off and has great potential. Good luck man hopefully both of our characters can make some interesting stories
ALL RIGHT I SUBMIT. To be honest I really want to have the marks be necessary so I will put them back. Thanks!
 
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