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NAME: True Form(Greg Chronos) Human Form(Craig Hardcore)
FACTION: Mandalorians
RANK: Ge'verd
Clan: Waiting
SPECIES: Maelibus
AGE: True Form(Ageless) Human Form(Appears 29)
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: True Form(7'8) Human Form(5'11)
WEIGHT: True Form(400lbs)Human Form(215 lbs)
EYES: True FormBlack(Red Pupils)Human Form(Blue)
HAIR: True Form(None)Human Form(Long Golden)
SKIN: True Form(Metallic Gold) Human Form(Tan)
CREDITS: 1,500
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: True Form (Natural claws, razor sharp teeth, and horns) Human Form(None)
FORCE SENSITIVE: Very

STRENGTH: True Form(18/10) Human Form(9/10)
DEXTERITY: True Form(18/10) Human Form(6/10)
DURABILITY: True Form (18/10) Human Form(7/10)
SPEED: True Form (16/20) Human Form(8/10)
CONSTITUTION: True Form(11/10) Human Form(8/10)
INTELLIGENCE: True Form(7/10) Human Form(7/10)
WISDOM: True Form(6/10) Human Form(6/10)
CHARISMA: True Form(0/10) Human Form(8/10)

FORCE POWERS:
Force Sense**
Force Push*
Force Pull*
Force Jump*
Force Leap**
Force Speed*
Telekinesis**
Telepathy*
Tapas*
Sense Life*

Hopeful*
Padawan**
Jedi Knight***
Jedi Master****
Council Member*****
Grandmaster******

SKILLS:


Hand to Hand Combat Martial Arts(10/10)
Pistols(10/10)
Assault Rifles(10/10)
Sniper Rifles(3/10)
Shotgun(7/10)
Heavy Weapons(8/10)
Explosives(5/10)
Knives(10/10)
Hand To Hand(10/10)
Swords(3/10)
Throwing Weapon(9/10)
Tactics(7/10)

Repairing Skills:

Droid(2/10)
Starship(1/10)
Weapons(3/10)
Armour(4/10)
Electronics(7/10)

Medical Skills:

First Aid(10/10)
Anatomy(7/10)
Surgery(5/10)
Physiotherapy(3/10)
Alien(8/10)

Piloting Skills:

Starfighter(10/10)
Frieghter(9/10)
Capital Ship(10/10)
Land Speeder(10/10)
Air Speeder(7/10)
Walker(2/10)


Crafting Skills:
Ammunition(10/10)
Armour(4/10)
Bombs(6/10)
Clothes(9/10)
Wood Working(5/10)
Metal Working(2/10)
Machines(3/10)
Electronics(10/10)
Weapons(10/10)

Miscellaneous Skills:

Trap Setting(7/10)
Cooking(10/10)
Stealth(10/10)


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form VII: Juyo / Vaapad*

Hopeful*
Padawan**
Jedi Knight***
Jedi Master****
Council Member*****
Grandmaster******

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
His strong cunning, smart. And Evil Strong willed.. His weakness is simply over conditioned. And he assumes because he has a true form he can never be killed in his human form. Or True form, which is wrong. But his to ignorant to realize that while his in his human form his easier to kill.

GEAR:
Human Gear While in Human form.

SHIP:
Small capable of hyper Drive

DROIDS:
None

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:

Greg believes his the greatest thing to creation, and that he is better then everyone in his human form. And True Form. He has everything. Meaning power related, Well he assumes does not mean he does have it. Which he sure doesn't, but his cocky attitude is sure to be under mined. His is the most unpredictable living being out there. Being who he is you expect him to shift to his true form and kill everyone like the cocky bastard he but, instead he taunts and says He doesn't want to turn to an ugly overpowered monster, who needs the shift. I can simply take you down with my Human Form. I am Death. Right? Wrong, his a person who fears his own strength both in human form and most different in his monster form.. The man can and can't be calm. Mostly he is unless provoked however he has a very short temper.

BIOGRAPHY:

The Birth:
As time grew, and I was brought on this plane I had no clue how, nor did I ask questions. All I did was be happy and move on. Everything was still everything was right, then I changed, I changed into a blood sucking, urge killing, Copperplate Toyshop Path. And then my crave for power raged.

The Force Age:
He was born ages ago, in his cool little planet, called Logo. Such a strange name. For a planet? Right? Wrong we've seen others. Anyways on to the story, as Greg grew. He discovered he was a force user, and became very found of this. His parents or however he was brought on to this bloody plane. Had a book on several force techniques which he learned few. But was lack the patience to fully train them, and even with those instantiations is was even hard to perform them, it took him 200 years to get those tech-quires. Down.

The Change:

During this time, He Greg disliked being an overpowered Monster, who can easily take down others who have been sent to the planet. So, a Army, or some form Of Government came on. And gave the people a choice, as to be turned as a human. And work for them, all refused but one, That One was Greg Chronos, he wanted to get rid of this change, by change he meant monster inside so. He decided hey, why not. And so the act of this terror begun as he became a most happy of the campers.

The Experimentation:
As He went with them, They offered him a lot, a life, a Pay, Cloths, Food, Everything Only if he was trained and worked for them as a Agent. And he was like sure why not what harm can it come? Nothing bad would come with that correct? Wrong. They brought him to a room, and put him in a coma. And he stayed there for the next 300 years. Finally released. He had awaken from the coma, more like broke out of it, out of his own sheer will. And was gasping in mere pain, there was a group, of bloody doctors laying on the ground, on what seemed to be a man and a group of four standing over them pointing guns at them. One had spotted Greg. And shot a bullet right in his chest, he gasped in pain never had he ever been damage this badly, he looked at his hands, they were no longer Metternich they was skin, Was this how he was going to die? He wanted to change. And then he changed, at will, having changed into a monster. Or Thy Devil. The bullet had been revolt from his chest onto the ground, and he got up, he was shot over 50 times with bullets no damaged was done. One had yelled."His a Monster." Before you know it, they were all ripped to shreds, within seconds, he shifted back to human form. His wound seemed to heal. But very slowly, he had a major headache, what was wrong, he walked, took another step, and feel. Blood now running down his skin, he was just stabbed by a knife. He rolled over to his back, and he was impaled by spikes. He felt dead.... Was he?

The Break Through:

Breaking through what seemed to be a dream, he was awoken from the coma, by the now said doctors, was this some form of game? How was he alive, he could have sworn he was just impaled by spikes. The Doctors were dead, no they were alive, yet they were dead seconds before, there was no blood. No Group. What the hell was going on. The Head Doc spoke, easing him slowly."The Exemption was a great victory you shall be a great slave." His words were craving of pure hated through the man. As if he was truly jealous that he had come out, Greg grabbed him by the neck, and snapped it. The Doctors all came out and pulled Guns, One, Two, Three, Four, Five, He was vaporized.

The Agent/Lost Demon:

He opened his eyes and gasped for air, what the hell. This was a second time he had broken out of was, this some form of dream or coma, a gun was pointed at his mouth. By what seemed to be a Agent."You caused this, you brought this war upon us. I ask one thing wake up and break from your coma, use your final will. or you will be used as a Alter Ego puppet." His words were unnerving and then boom, the shot was flared at his skull. Boom, dead.

The Truth:

He woke up yelling in pain, as half the building was ripped and there was in on going war. People, dying left and right, and he was in chains. Seconds later he was released. In he fell on his knees, and was given a gun to hold. His head pounded like a rabbit, he was shot in the shoulder. Or was already shot, the bullet had come out and he showed healing capabilities but they were slow. He wanted to shift to help, so he shifted into the monster. And begun running down and up the war killing people, without any reason. Upon shifting back, he went back to the building, and found the Fake ID. Money, ship and equipment. And Left. He was used as a gen-pig, and was a project not gone wrong. They were just to let to see it.

The Army:

Later he joined the army for five years, and seemed to have better control over his Shifting, and knew how to use the force both in human and true form.

The Mandos:

He Later joined the Mandos In hopes of support, and helping them, and he swore never to turn to his true form unless in danger, or if he really needed to. As for as they know, He is Craig Hardcore a Human being not some Demon.

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BOUNTIES COLLECTED:


DUELING RING MATCHES:


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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I may be wrong, but I don't think Maelibus can switch species at will.
 

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Read the History.
 

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I did, it still doesn't give any logical explanation how someone can switch species.
 

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Experimentation in order to do that.
 

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lololololol. Exquisite.
 

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Could.you tone down his stats? Being that op leaves little to NO room for improvement and will.be no fun rping with for others. Not being offensive just telling you my opinion.
 

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I like the idea Zen and I don't mean to be a spoilsport but no amount of experimentation can cause someone to change species. You could shift your conscious into another body like Callista Ming did, but the ability to switch species at will seems a bit far-fetched.
 

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Could.you tone down his stats? Being that op leaves little to NO room for improvement and will.be no fun rping with for others. Not being offensive just telling you my opinion.

His stats are not overpowered. There racial. But if you wish I will.

And Apollo, it's only Human, And back his his. No other Species expect his and human.
 

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Thank you :) 10 is usually the max a character can be is all :P if he is 10 out of ten in strength and such that is cool just balance other skills accordingly
 

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Thank you :) 10 is usually the max a character can be is all :P if he is 10 out of ten in strength and such that is cool just balance other skills accordingly

His not ten out of ten in his true form, his Strength speed, Dur, Is unrivaled by other species in his true form, while in his Human form it's lessen to 12/10)
 

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His not ten out of ten in his true form, his Strength speed, Dur, Is unrivaled by other species in his true form, while in his Human form it's lessen to 12/10)

Well, by your previous statement, he is only human. If he is only human than a 12/10 is completely and totally overpowered.
 

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Well, by your previous statement, he is only human. If he is only human than a 12/10 is completely and totally overpowered.

During the expedition he kept some of his strength as a Demon to Human.
 

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That's a problem man, see that would be considered over powered in human form...in true form its fine but in human for an 8/10 would be a tough mando but you would have to tone down charisma, intellect, and wisdom. Being that strong leaves no reason for training threads and thus makes him almost useless to a clan rather then an asset.

Again not being offensive just trying to help :)
 

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That's a problem man, see that would be considered over powered in human form...in true form its fine but in human for an 8/10 would be a tough mando but you would have to tone down charisma, intellect, and wisdom. Being that strong leaves no reason for training threads and thus makes him almost useless to a clan rather then an asset.

Again not being offensive just trying to help :)


Your not trying to help at all.

I'll put it to a 9/10.
 

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During the expedition he kept some of his strength as a Demon to Human.

The experimentation itself doesn't make sense. You have something going here, but it needs a major overhaul. You have to at least explain how it is scientifically possible to switch races.
 

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I am trying to help you man, I just know very few people will want to have him in their clan if he is TOO powerful.

Thank you for the slight nerf :)
 

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I am trying to help you man, I just know very few people will want to have him in their clan if he is TOO powerful.

Thank you for the slight nerf :)


To Overpowered? He;ll barely use the True Form, Unless his in war helping the Mandos, or fighting a Bloody Sith? His Human stats are fine now.
 

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I understand that and I was talking about human form but you did the requested editing and I thanked you :)
 
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