Craig Hardcore

[Kiro]

I will not be making changes I've made changes as it is, and if no one rps with me, I'll just join open threads.

 

[Zen]

Thanks...I think...

And Zen people will stop posting/ignore you if you don't make him reasonable...and i thought you said he WASN'T a hybrid...because Vermin IS a hybrid that is the definition of mixed genes

His not a born Hybrid, He is reasonable in human form. I swear I will do something stupid. If I don't release rage and stress out off myself. I;m going punch the pillow so I won't do something stupid and harm myself.

 

[Fyston]

You are incorrigible. If having an uberleetpwnzor character is that important to you, don't expect people to line up to RP with you.

 

[Matty]

That's enough guys. If Zen wants his character to stay the way it is, than there's really nothing we can do. Let's just leave the kid alone.

 

[Brandon Rhea]

Zen, people are pointing out changes that need to be made. You've been told on numerous occasions in the past that this is how the profile process works. You have a number of people here constructively pointing out flaws in your character. They're not insulting you, they're trying to help you, but they can't help you unless you help yourself.

You're free to ignore them if you want. If you do, though, we're free to reject this character. I'll leave that one up to you.

 

[Apollyon]

Threatening self harm is not cool mate...people I know have killed themselves over things that in the long run DON'T matter...this isn't a HUGE life changing event...its just a character that no one thinks is reasobable due to his backstory

 

[Corrupt Justice]

I apologize for dragging this out but another reason why the forum Vince and I used to be at went downhill was because of the number of shape shifters that made no sense. They were a way for players to be whatever species they wanted to be and pretty much hide their characters at will and be other characters. The amount of meta gaming and god moding was ridiculous and so I'm hesitant to even look at another shapeshifter again, especially in the hands of a person who is known for being argumentative and making bad choices when it comes to rping. This is just my two cents.

 

[Icaro]

Lol

 

[Brandon Rhea]

Lol

Thank you for your well thought out and eloquently stated post. Suggestions like these really show the best that SWRP has to offer, and they truly nurture the creative writing process so people can improve. If more people were as helpful as you, everyone here could be publishing novels.

Just kidding. Don't spam.

 

[Toska]

Only the talented/well-connected publish novels, but in the context of this particular thread, the concept seems a bit underworked to me. It appears to be something you thought was momentarily cool.

 

[BLADE]

I think most of the criticisms I might have brought up have been addressed, though I would note that the broad thrust of something that hasn't been said --that one shouldn't overly fixate on numbers or really the physical attributes of characters except in the cases where it is crucial to the development of said character.

Aside from that, I realize it's been brought up that Zen's first language is not English. In that sense, I'm on the same boat, I was raised speaking two languages that were not English at home, and there was a period in my life when I knew very little English and had to overcome a series of challenges for the most basic communication. There's an understandable impulse to withdraw and to magnify every single setback or criticism or incident as being utterly crushing, but in the end, most of these things help us to grow as users of language, as people (you can make friends!) and so forth. I won't presume to guess if this is Zen's state of mind or not, but if it is, I would urge him to step back for a moment and relax. It helps to gain perspective as most people here (and people in general) deal in good faith and just want to help him.

 

[Zen]

Bac will be hopefully Locking this seeing as I won't be using him at all.

 

[Brandon Rhea]

Closed and archived as requested.