The character game

[Chairdor]

Like:A Jawa using his power in the force to mitigate his inability to grow strong in light saber combat, I like that it's a good concept

Dislike: Some things in the form are filled out incorrectly like Rank. Also there are a series of spelling errors


Re'gi Alvanti

 

[Black Noise]

Re'gi Alvanti

I've said it many times before, I'll say it again. I rarely, RARELY read through an entire character profile. If someone wants me to examine their entire character profile, I either need to have circumstances forcing me to read through it all, or the writer needs to consume my attention with his writing.

Unholy damn, I like this guy.

Like: Other than your phenomenal writing, the fact that the guy doesn't carry a blaster. Not many people are brave enough to do that.

Dislike: Sorry, I can't BS a dislike here. I didn't dislike anything.



For me, good ol Sogar Derimsa. Not my best character, but he is my first. Reading him is like reading an evolution of my writing throughout being on this site.
Not much changed lol, I don't think I got any better.

 

[Galisdoren]

I really like Sogar, and its obvious you put a lot of work into him. I actually looked at him before, since I stalk everyone's characters out of curiousity. There's nothing I don't like about him. What do you not like about him? XP.

My main character is Thamis, but he still needs some work.

 

[Canora Sabresong]

I really like Sogar, and its obvious you put a lot of work into him. I actually looked at him before, since I stalk everyone's characters out of curiousity. There's nothing I don't like about him. What do you not like about him? XP.

My main character is Thamis, but he still needs some work.

Like: although I could not read the entire profile in one pass, I have to say, Brilliant. your charactor is all that I could hope for for an eccelent villian, and the descriptions are by no means lackluster or inadequit. Combining story and generic profile types was a good idea aswell.

Dislike: the picture looks like owl-man. That makes me sad. The perfect supervillian and had a very sad ending.


Skyrell

 

[Sophia McLaren-Cobb]

Like: Jawa with the powers of the Force. Not an everyday sight.
Dislike: Nothing.

Zextripon.

 

[Chairdor]

Like: Very balanced stat wise, a big strong unintelligent warrior who isnt very dexterous

Dislike: The lack of threads where you've learned all those force powers, especially choke


Sen

 

[Bantha]

Like: He has an Ewok as a pet. So original!
Dislike: His biography and personality section is a bit "choppy" and repetitive to read. "He was this, he did that.."

Next poster, pick one from my signature. Tsukihana, please?

 

[Sophia McLaren-Cobb]

(Ignore this post)
As a matter of fact, you might have not properly read his bio. He was a former Jedi Padawan (hence where he learned Force Push and Pull). The others were taught to him by his family, lol.

 

[Silver Cutlass]

Like: He has an Ewok as a pet. So original!
Dislike: His biography and personality section is a bit "choppy" and repetitive to read. "He was this, he did that.."

Next poster, pick one from my signature. Tsukihana, please?

Like: I don't think I've seen a Force-user that uses a true Saber Pike, plus I like her armor.
Dislike: Nothing really. Except, maybe, the typo under Lightsaber forms.

Nero Linaki.

 

[Sophia McLaren-Cobb]

Like: Awesome character!
Dislike: Nothing

Tabatha Warr

 

[Chairdor]

Like: adding a mental handicap like autism is very unique
Dislike: Still a pretty bare bones biography

Sen

 

[Silver Cutlass]

Like: She's very mysterious, something few characters can attest to, as most are laid out for you to see.
Dislike: Nothing at all

Lyon Skirata

 

[Maxx]

Like: Human
Dislike: Mando

Death

 

[Fang.]

Like: Name
Dislike: No link to character in sig. :(

Lucien Fang

 

[Canora Sabresong]

Like: A very good description of a well-rounded but strong charactor.


Dislike: He looks sad. Is he supposed to look sad?



Skyrell (again)

 

[Tank]

Like: A force sensitive Jawa is a very creative concept

Dislike: Name, "Many scars odd-smell loner with face of ghorfa" lol I'm guessing he didn't pick his name. :P

Senator Landon Fox VVV In sig.

 

[Sophia McLaren-Cobb]

Like: Is a Senator
Dislike: Nothing

Varnus Maximus

 

[Sophia McLaren-Cobb]

Ignore this post.

 

[Lan]

Like: Is a Senator
Dislike: Nothing

Varnus Maximus

Like: Always good to see a character being able to take revenge and for credits? Can't beat that!

Dislike: My mother is a type 1 diabetic, so I would like to see how that plays off with this character. Diabetes is very hard to manage, type I even more so. I don't ever remember my mom ever feeling healthy in her life. :(

Malaria is also a very infectious and I don't know if any spaceports would let someone leave with a disease like that. I would like to see how these illnesses affect him.

The only character I have is Valina, in my signature.

 

[Sophia McLaren-Cobb]

Like: History
Dislike: Nothing

Storey Weed (not in sig)