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Rector_Ras

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Like: The consept of him is cool be fun to see what you do with him
Dislike: force Stealth isnt an apprentice level thing more so without having any force training done in your bio

Jason
 

Ace of Hearts

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Like: The entire profile seems thought out and well written.
Dislike: 't is a bit short but otherwise, no complaints

Atlas

edit: ninja'd!

For Jason:

Like: Most everything
Dislike: The pictures of him just bug me for some reason
 
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Black Noise

BN
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Weeeel shite shibe.
I like her, read through her whole character, very nice ^_^

Like: Her hard life, her survival instinct, and drinking. She and Konstantine would get along well as drinking buddies xD.
Disliked: Minor errors in writing, proof read it once more and you'll catch them.

Sogar Derimsa(Fire)
 

Wit

Beyond Measure
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Like: The few lines before the various entries. Set up the character really well IMO.
Dislike: There could maybe be a little more in the History of power, though that's just me. Oh and I noticed his tag says Sith while the faction and rank sections are listed as N/A.

Darman Mereel. (Link in sig.)
 

Rector_Ras

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Like A Mondo that has to find out what it means to be Mando
Dislike Stats are a bit high

Styrak
 

Lucid

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Like: Seems like a bit of nerdy kid.
Dislike: Has freaky eyes.

Seamus.
 

MasterTyvokka

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Likes: He is from another timeline. Should be interesting.
Dislikes: I am not sure how I feel about the whole time travel thing.

Ryak De'ruus
 

Chairdor

The once and future Duke
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Like: Very well organized, easy to find exactly what information you are looking for

Dislike: The stats are relative to the point of near meaningless, giving no hard numbers or idea of power level

El'Tari Mallum
 

Galisdoren

Welcome to the New Age
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Like: The character in general. I also like how the stats are expanded.
Dislike: The profile seems a bit boring. Maybe some color could help, but I understand some people prefer just one color.

Thamis.
 

Haunting Melody

Ghostly Mistress
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Like: Overall a very well done profile.
Dislike: I admit the layout confused me a little.

Amaterasu Tomoe (Sig)
 

Hannah

Basically Khaleesi
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Like: Love the layout! It's really useful when I need to find certain aspects of information.

Dislike: She seems a tad bit stronger than I'm comfortable with, but hey, that's just me.

Serra Talorae.
 
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Saul Perth

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Edit: Double Ninja'd! Damn I'm slow. This is for Thamis.

Like: Extremely well written and informative bio, well done.
Dislike: His stats do seem a bit high for a character right out of the gate. Strength isn't much of an issue, but dexterity (as I interpret it anyway) is more practice/skill based, perhaps roll it back a notch or two.

Saul Perth
 

Tank

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Like: He's very diversified, Jedi, slicer, pilot, and decent shot. But isn't OP in all of them like some characters are. I also like the "Jedi leading the Rebels" idea.

Dislike: He seems to be very well put together and stable with no clear cut weakness. I'm a big into characters having a fatal flaw/Achilles heal.

Bet'aani or Kaa'rol
 

Hannah

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I guess no one is doing me? Okay, I'll go again.

Like: The Voice Diaries! (Or what you have of it, as of now.) Very creative.

Dislike: I think it should be in Spoilers, so there isn't a big wall of text.
 

Saul Perth

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You gotta tell us which character to review. :CHappy
 

Hannah

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I meant to put the same one as my last one. Guess I just want my money back from my last review! D:

Serra Talorae.
 

Haunting Melody

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Like: Really love the arrangement! Plus, the bio is actually pretty interesting. Oh, and the whole senator gone rebel thing is cool. Haha
Dislike: She makes me feel really short. :(

Amaterasu Tomoe, please.
 

Saul Perth

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I meant to put the same one as my last one. Guess I just want my money back from my last review! D:

Serra Talorae.

Edited at 8:15, I caught you. :CStern

Like: Very nice and organized, well written, and a senator, cool cool.
Dislike: 152 lbs seems a bit high unless she's completely ripped under her fancy senator robes.

Pass on the review cause I got ninja'd.
 

Haunting Melody

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Sorry, Saul. :( Would you like me to do a review for one of your characters? haha
 

Saul Perth

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Haha, nope. Good on you for being such a fast reader and writer.
 
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