Like: Her story, the way her profile is formatted
Dislike: More of a pet peeve really, but there are no statistics on things like dexterity, constitution, etc.
Like: That you go into detail and give little quirks to her
Dislike: That she's mastered Niman and Jar'kai and has so many Force powers for being such a new character.
Like: I like how you always talk as your character in profiles, since most rp is third person it give you a chance to show exactly how the character speaks and thinks, a sort of voice for us to remember when rping with him
Dislike: Theres some tiny grammatical errors one being And now all any of can do is hope missing an us there, but the fact that I'm splitting technical hairs means you've done well
Like: Pretty much everything that's there so far.
Dislike: Seems to be missing a definite personality, at least from what I can tell from the bio. But that can be established via RP.
Like: The profile layout, looks very neat and tidy, first thing I noticed actually.
Dislike: The Jedi emblem in the ISB sheet. Its an ISB sheet so should bear the Imperial Emblem, will be stored in their databases no.
Like: Freakin sweet! Hutt = All around awesome.
Dislike: Maybe he's a bit old for an early rank in the cartel, but I have no idea how that's all going down so I could be very wrong on that.
Like: Everything, actually. Especially the grouping of the stats between physical and mental.
Dislike: Can't really think of anything. I had to go into Grammar Nazi mode to find something. Here it is: "It was pure coincidence, or the will of the Force, depending on who you ask." It should be "whom".
Like: The personality section left me with a clear and distinct impression of what to expect from the guy
Dislike: I like how you used green and red to denote positive and negatives in strengths and weaknesses, but for the other color changes you could just use a bolded font
The Voice:
Like: The complete and utter self love he has.
Dislike: He's pretty damn old. you'll get like... What? Two or three RPS before he keels over?