The character game

[Skyway]

Artyom Kchul;
Like: Nice layout
Dislike:
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Take your pick, all in sig.

 

[Kenico]

Zeru,
Like: His individualist Attitude
Dislike:

Owen Koga (The Exiled)

 

[Dóiteán]

Like: the bio
Dislike: profile layout

The Grave Digger

 

[Ender]

Like: the tone
Dislike: lack of any kind of flair

Soldier in siggy

 

[Marf]

Like: Well-written, dark and intense.
Dislike: Not long or detailed enough for my liking, what is his personality like beyond his beliefs and experiences? Does he enjoy being a stormtrooper aside from his disagreements with the Empire?

Satoryu

 

[KineticEnergy]

Satoryu

Like: I LOVE this character. After reading the entire thing, I came to the conclusion that you put a lot of time and effort into making a super unique character. I really like the idea of having a ghost inside of Satoryu. I kinda died a little inside when I found out that she murdered the Jedi Apprentice.

Dislike: Not really anything but it took me a while to read it

4RK-008 (Link in sig)

 

[Nor'baal]

Like: The idea of the character is cool. A droid rights movement, I like.

Dislike: It's not a more "typical profile" and I don't like change... Kidding. I am not sure about the image, doesn't look robotic enough for me.

Character: Nor'baal, link in the mighty sig.

 

[Marf]

Like: I LOVE this character. After reading the entire thing, I came to the conclusion that you put a lot of time and effort into making a super unique character. I really like the idea of having a ghost inside of Satoryu. I kinda died a little inside when I found out that she murdered the Jedi Apprentice.

Dislike: Not really anything but it took me a while to read it

Omg thankyou so much! I didn't expect you to read the whole thing lmao XD That means alot to me because I've worked very hard on her. She's no longer possessed though ;)

And sorry Norby, but for some reason your sig isn't loading for me Dx

Satsuki

 

[Bee]

Omg thankyou so much! I didn't expect you to read the whole thing lmao XD That means alot to me because I've worked very hard on her. She's no longer possessed though ;)

And sorry Norby, but for some reason your sig isn't loading for me Dx

Satsuki

Honestly, the only thing I dislike about either of your characters is that they're labeled as 'Asian' when there's no such place/classification in Star Wars, though I totally get wanting to make the designation. Other than that, I think they're really lovely and I enjoy the narratives/Sith tea time theme. The sister concept is really interesting too, especially since you made two characters instead of just one sheet for them (they're so different and whatnot) and I know I was only supposed to review one but uh, whatever, they're both cool.

I know Vi is a mess. Go easy on me.

 

[Skyway]

Vi;
LIke: She badass and I like the layout -.-
Dislike: She needs a theme.
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Zeru

 

[Cainhurst Crow]

Like: The triple personality breakdown you put in there. Gives a very good portrait of your guy.

Dislike: He has a single shoulder pad...why?

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Nazar Dal'serah

 

[Insoulent]

Vi;
LIke: She badass and I like the layout -.-
Dislike: She needs a theme.
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Zeru

Like: He's actually a stupid solid character (good thing). I like how leveled he is and even he is in stats, he has the potential to grow and be rather powerful in his own right. I'm assuming he's going to be an Assassin of some sort, given the pictures and his current stat layout. Think him and Arkantos would get along quite well, and I do enjoy the character a lot.
Dislike: He doesn't have a lot of threads. His personality is general descriptive, but I'm sure he doesn't fit the bill on every single thing listed there, which is something I've found. Doesn't fully-explain the character's personality, just a generalization of other personality types. Again, I'd like to see more threads of him so that I could get a better read on the character as he seems pretty interesting, but still relatively new. Want to see how much more of a journey you could take him, maybe beyond the Nightsister's, or at least off of Dathomir.

Arkantos or Sandy, whichever one you think needs more work (whichever you have more dislike towards).

EDIT: Since I got ninja'd...

Like: The triple personality breakdown you put in there. Gives a very good portrait of your guy.

Dislike: He has a single shoulder pad...why?

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Nazar Dal'serah

Like: First of all, I love all things saurians. Reptile characters usually are my favorite besides bug-creatures. I like his personality, strong and cunning with a twist of ambition, make for a powerful darksider in the future.
Dislike: Get a better picture, bro! Also, I don't see any threads he's been in, same as before, would love to see more threads and see his journey of transformation, I think his anger could be explored a lot more, maybe even get him in trouble?

 

[Rom]

Sandy Rajax
Like: The image, the character backstory and the name. Rajax just sounds cool...
Dislike; I kind of feel like the parts of her that are troublesome, namely her depression and anorexia dont really come through in anything but the paragraph where you explain that she has it. The POV biography blurb comes off less depressed and more just kind of angrily apathetic about where she is in life.

Vereor.

 

[Sreeya]

Sandy Rajax
Like: The image, the character backstory and the name. Rajax just sounds cool...
Dislike; I kind of feel like the parts of her that are troublesome, namely her depression and anorexia dont really come through in anything but the paragraph where you explain that she has it. The POV biography blurb comes off less depressed and more just kind of angrily apathetic about where she is in life.

Vereor.

Vereor. I'm not gonna judge the profile, but the character.

Like: I've seen this char since its conception. It's been amazing to see him grow, and he fit into the role of Darth and then DL very well. The persona you developed for him as a powerful, intimidating character comes across very well in your writing. It's also incredible how you stay true to his style of speech, because I know how difficult it can be to adapt into that and stay true. It's also really impressive how you utilize all his assets and features in every reply. You make his tail swing, or twitch, or make it be a representation of his emotion. It goes beyond just telling, it makes every movement a depiction of his character. This is definitely one of my favorite characters this timeline. :)

Dislikes: While I love that you projected the character image of him so well, I feel like Vereor is prone to become stuck in that one persona. I think you should explore other aspects of him and go more into depth, so he doesn't risk falling into a singular role. Outside of that, no criticisms. Love this char.


I don't care which char is reviewed.. all my profiles are outdated so if someone could review the char itself, that'd be better.

 

[Marf]

Andraste.

Like: Everything about her, she is my favourite character (alongside Audroti). She is complex, original, captivating and her IC story and development has been nothing short of epic. She is everything I would want in a Sith Empress. I could go on forever about how much I adore her.

Dislike: I've only been in one thread with her :p and that her profile is outdated.

Satoryu

 

[Bantha]

Likes: I like how well developed she is (I think I've said that before) and especially the personality. I've read it more than once, and each time I get the same impression that I know Satoryu inside and out.

Dislikes: My dislike is more of a matter of personal taste-- I prefer not to have to scroll through biographies and walls of text to get to other parts of the profile, which is why I like neat spoilers, even if they look 'ugly'.

Take 'yer pick of characters!

 

[Hannah]

Per Atlas:

Like: I love the Theme. It really sets a definitive tone for the rest of the read. I also like the overall layout of the profile.

Dislike: This isn't really a dislike, but more of a complaint in regards to the fact that the Personality is still a WIP, but I can't wait to see more!

Serra Talorae, please and thank you.

 

[Marf]

Like: a long, detailed personality section always impresses me.

Dislike: Some bits of the bio seem a bit inconsistent, for example, what was her relationship like with her brother and what role did his death play in the story? But if you weren't going for a literary narrative type of bio then I suppose it isn't a big deal.

Satsuki

 

[Dóiteán]

I can honestly say that I like everything and dislike nothing.

Chandranath Mingan

 

[Cainhurst Crow]

Liked: The characters look and backstory, I love a good avenging story arc.
Disliked: I felt his likes/dislikes and strengths/weaknesses were a bit lacking, and that they could have been a little more detailed.

Jahairal Val Kharon