The character game

[Andrewza]

nice format


nothing really



Sgt jhon higs
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?55962-sgt-Jhon-higs&p=1105609#post1105609

 

[Sierrien]

Sgt jhon higs
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?55962-sgt-Jhon-higs&p=1105609#post1105609

Like : He has lots of guns. Guns are fun. Also explosives. Interesting character... though I feel he might die soon since he never retreats? >.>

Dislike : Your profile could use some proofreading. Could ask someone to do it for you if you needed, there are friendly people about. Would help ^^

Also, his nickname is Sarge. What happens if he gets a promotion? Is he just a *insert rank higher than sergeant here* that everyone calls Sarge? "This is lieutenant Sarge." Seems silly to me <.< ANYWHO

Lairiel Ruanthor

 

[Andrewza]

rebels have no ranks

 

[TheSilentWind]

rebels have no ranks

The Rebels have a loose rank structure but they have ranks.

Likes: I like the fact that she hears voices in her head. That really presents various rp opportunities, and makes the character very unique. The fact that she is extremely cautious also presents her with a weakness to overcome since no one can't always not trust anybody.

Dislikes: This is just a personal preference but I like characters with templates. In my opinion, it makes reading more visually pleasing.


Vaxvesh Quao

 

[Joy Carleec]

Likes: Loves his picture. First person bio is interesting. Battle of Coruscant was a good turning point to fall.

Dislikes: (Mostly nit-picking, since i found very little to dislike) His personality seems flat. "calculting and wants to kill jedi and sith". Some formatting; "and he possesses the skill and agility associated with Zabrak his age." Multiple mentions of animalistic, considering he's opposite. Neutral Evil uses female pronouns. Bio repeats his quote, when its used earlier. "some jedi recommended" but who are they and why do their opinions matter? Jedi Kidnapping people - i was under the impression they asked the persons' permission to take them and would be informitive, not to mention finding the childs guardian. Unsupervised force sensitive child on a unfamilar planet. Bullying/Fights resulting in expulsion.. Wouldn't they take you aside away from others and teach you more how to resist these temptations or train you better to battle the dark side? Non-Animalistic person going "beserk". Calling powers by their "Force" mechanical name, sounds weird to say from a first perspective.

Critism desired for my Chiron, Pinto. :)

 

[Clayton]

like: CENTAUR OMG RUTH CENTAUR!!!!!!!

don't like: no RPs.


Rook.

 

[Marf]

Like: He's achieved an impressive amount ICly and is great at getting involved in things.
Dislike: His personality (at least on the profile) is a bit lacking, I know there's a lot more to him than just that.

Satoryu

 

[Jaime]

Like: I honestly love both the format and pace at which you introduce the character.
Dislike: What's not to like? I hadn't looked at Sato's profile too much before now, but I honestly can't find anything I don't like. Excellent job, in my opinion.

Cal-Doran. :31:

 

[Flying Blind]

Like: First things first, I love how he doesn't always use his strength, that keeps him from becoming on of those besets brutes that just shoot the crap out of everything, even when no ones there. Also, have to be honest, I love spoilers. When I saw a spoiler within a spoiler, it was like *mind blown*.

Dislikes: I really don't have anything, maybe as a side note he has no enemies as of yet, but you can count that towards his charisma

Kannick Stargrave

 

[Chairdor]

Like: The dedication to creating a huge rich backstory for your character

Dislike: The vanillaness of the profile. Not that vanilla is bad but taking a look over some of the amazing templates out and about can give you an eye popping visual presentation which will compliment your fantastic writing

Either of my characters, just click the gif below to get their links

 

[Mr.BossMan]

Jessie Sarc

Like: the pictures there awesome

Dislike: His middle name, he sounds so cool but then it's all like Martha. Ya.

Anthoni my only character

 

[Oreus]

A'ight Anthoni:

Like: The struggles he has being both a Jedi and seeming to seek revenge as well.

Dislike: The bio is hard to read as a wall of text. Maybe add color for dialogue, titles to sections, or a couple images?

I suppose Fias would be who I choose. In the sig.

 

[The Mild Mannered Robot]

Like: A Quarren Jedi, it's just good to see one

Dislike: His alias sounds silly

Tezlo Varrik

 

[Cap'n Hobbes]

Likes: he is compulsive, compulsive people are cool :3 also S4 G3 is pretty sweet

Dislikes: he seems rather lacking in something... *cough*rps*hack*

Nala (though I shouldn't be complaining about lack of rping c: )

 

[CaptainWolfgang]

Like: Character has background development that is tragic without being unreasonable

Dislike: The tall staff imbued with the Force is cool, though I don't know if it would be able to defend against a lightsaber

Kalo Wolftenn

 

[Minuteman75]

Like: Your guy is a cool character and the design on the profile is great.

Dislike: There isn't really much to dislike about this one.

Forim Viridux

 

[Loco]

Like: Your guy is a cool character and the design on the profile is great.

Dislike: There isn't really much to dislike about this one.

Forim Viridux

Like: I've been sort of keeping on eye on your RP's and you get some great character development out for Forim. Great continuity. Nice internal conflicts.

Dislike: I saw the Blue Man group in Vegas once. So, as far as blue skinned folk go next to them Forim's kind of lackluster. Try learning to play music with everyday objects.


Arya. See below. I'm considering doing some much needed update/rewrites with all the post Sisk stuff :30:

 

[Calixis]

Like: I always like seeing characters who are above the average roleplaying character age of about 20-29. At times it feels like most of the roleplaying worlds population die of old age at around 35.

Dislike: The Nova .gif doesn't really match the image I had in my head of a fourty-something battle hardened Mandalorian woman I'd built up reading the profile, even if she's very agile.

There's more I like but, eh, like to one dislike.

 

[Nirvana]

Like: I like how he have changed over the course of RP's, going from being a stormtrooper to joining the rebellion.

Dislike: Can't say there is anything that I dislike about the character.

Gabriel

 

[Nor'baal]

Like: Really well written, and a 'characterful' person! Attention to detail, as well as a good flow in his back story makes for good reading!

Dislike: The second post, it would be nice for the coding to tie in better with that of the first post - more of a look thing than any thing else.



And for me: The Mogul in my signature :)