The Witch of Endor

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NAME: Sakura Uchiwa; commonly known as the first Witch of Endor
FACTION: N/A
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Lamia
AGE: 362
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5' 9"
WEIGHT: 131 lbs.
EYES: Hazel
HAIR: Silver
SKIN: Grey
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: N/A
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Like most of her species, the Witch of Endor has preternatural strength.
DEXTERITY: Like most of her species, the Witch has preternatural speed but has a horrible sense of balance.
CONSTITUTION: The Witch has good health due to the fact that she's able to simply drain the life force of others.
INTELLIGENCE: The Witch has average intelligence.
WISDOM: The Witch has become wise over the centuries.
CHARISMA: Instead of appealing to charm, the Witch has an air of eccentricity about her.

FORCE POWERS:
-Farsight
-Force persuasion
-Dopplegänger
-Telekinesis
-Animal Friendship (self-learned during marunment on Endor)

SKILLS:
-Novice flying skills
-Intermediate lightsaber combat
-Lamia inherit abilities (life force drain, retractable claws, etc.)

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
The Witch only learned the basics of Form I: Shii-Cho.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
The Witch of Endor's strengths in combat lay in support rather than head-to-head combat. While her skills as a lamia allow her above average speed and physical strength, her eye coordination is horrible, along with having a poor sense of balance. She prefers to act outside a battle situation, or at least not participating. Her hermit days have gained her an aura of an eccentric woman. During her self-exile, she trained hard on her Force abilities and kept her strength up with a lightsaber but due to no direct training in regards to lightsaber combat, her skills with a lightsaber have not improved much.

GEAR:
The Witch of Endor wears a black armorweave cloak. She generally carries two red lightsabers with her. Since she prefers her enigmatic presence, she wears a black helmet that covers her face. However, the glass in the front is able to slit open, allowing her to feast on her victims.

SHIP:
Her original ship was destroyed when she crashlanded on Endor. She has yet to obtain a new one.

PETS:
The Witch owns a pet Munyip named Samuel that she befriended during her time on Endor.

PERSONALITY:
When she first joined the Jedi Order, she was an eager Padawan. She was always reading some holocron or training with her peers. However, during her time on Endor, the Witch lost a little of her sanity, prone to psychosis once in a while. She found herself become less reliant on others and instead helping others. However, her mental stability was broken on Endor, making her almost psychopathic.

BIOGRAPHY:
The Witch was born on Obroa-skai over three hundred years ago. Like many of her species, the Witch had been discriminated by those around her. Everyone except for a man named Gin Akatsuki. Gin Akatsuki was an Obroan Jedi Master and wanted the Witch to join the Jedi Order. The Witch eagerly accepted Gin's offer.
Over the next couple years, the Witch trained hard under the wing of Gin Akatsuki. While many Jedi teachers focused on the basics, after making sure the Witch had an underlying understanding of the Force, Gin began to teach her the technique Dopplegänger, believing advanced techniques need to be started right away, so that they can be mastered sooner than usual. Due to the peaceful times, lightsaber combat was not emphasized, and instead focus was placed on Force skills. While she had ordinary talent in telekinesis and Force persuasion, she had a knack for Farsight.
When Gin decided that it was time for her to go on a mission, the Witch easily complied. They were assigned to meet with a Wookie ambassador on Kashyyyk, which, if the treaty Gin held were to have been signed by the Wookie, would have ended Wookie slavery, the two Jedi never arrived. Their navicomputer malfunctioned and they ended in the Endor system. When Gin tried to fix the computer, the autopilot went out of control and sped towards the Forest Moon of Endor. The ship crashed onto Endor. While the Witch survived with major injuries, which she healed by draining nearby geejaws, Gin Akatsuki did not survive the crash.
The Witch buried Gin Akatsuki that day. She quickly learned that she would be on Endor for a while since the communications equipment had been pulverized. For two and a half hundred years, the Witch nomadically lived on Endor. The time alone had drastic effects on her mentality. Over the years, the Witch managed to develop her own adaptation of animal friendship. She befriended many creatures that would keep her company over the years, mainly geejaws and munyips; her last one, which she still has, was a munyip named Samuel.
Finally, a corporation wanting to harvest the trees on Endor, arrived on the planet. Suspicious, the Witch spied on the workers for several days until she approached the group. The workers were most baffled by the appearance of a strange woman in a deserted planet. They took her in and have her food and water. The years had taken its toll and by then the Witch herself had forgotten her real name, or so she told the workers. After calling in with their bosses, they gave her a ride to Coruscant.
On Coruscant, she visited the Jedi Temple, wondering what the history books said about her and her master, Gin Akatsuki. To her dismay, there were little records on Gin Akatsuki and his apprentice, mainly criticism on the Jedi Master's teaching methods of teaching Dopplegänger right off the bat. The Witch, feeling no more attachment to the Jedi Order, decided to reveal her status to the Jedi Order and left the planet. Later that year, the Alsakan Crisis broke out. Since then, she nomadically travelled between systems, acting as a shaman or hermit from time to time.

The Witch would eventually take on an apprentice, Eden Apocrypha, training her the ways of the Force. However, a year after they began to travel together, a team from the Second Order of Lettow, led by Sakaki Uchiwa. Eden survived, but Sakura was slain. Sakaki, realizing the Witch was his own sister, began to despair. He searched for his sister's apprentice but Eden was lost to the Dune Sea.
 
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If no one is going to say anything about this character I'm going to use my uriel blanchard...

You know weiss, seeing as we both have "lamia" characters. Wanna rp using them? It could be interesting to see the two of them converse or battler or what ever floats your boat.
 
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If no one is going to say anything about this character I'm going to use my uriel blanchard...

You know weiss, seeing as we both have "lamia" characters. Wanna rp using them? It could be interesting to see the two of them converse or battler or what ever floats your boat.

I didn't know you had an energy vampire. The only other one I've known is Sakaki Uchiwa.
 

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I was the first one to make an energy vampire, and I was berated with comments about mine being too overpowered because of the strength and speed. Now I look at yours which no one has said a thing about, and I am really pissed. It isn't the fact that no one has said anything that has my piss in a boil. It is the fact that your character is above the power at which I got complaints for my character, and no one has said a thing about it.

Really makes me think that I was fairly judged on my character...
/Sarcasm
 

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Calm down, man. I'm sure it was simply... It could have been... I can't really say much in their defense if that was the case. However I am sure they didn't do it biased. I'm like 90% sure.
 

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I was the first one to make an energy vampire, and I was berated with comments about mine being too overpowered because of the strength and speed. Now I look at yours which no one has said a thing about, and I am really pissed. It isn't the fact that no one has said anything that has my piss in a boil. It is the fact that your character is above the power at which I got complaints for my character, and no one has said a thing about it.

Really makes me think that I was fairly judged on my character...
/Sarcasm

I used Wookiepedia's stats to determine strength and speed. And I then made some counterproductive traits to help counter those "preternatural speed and strength".

Calm down, man. I'm sure it was simply... It could have been... I can't really say much in their defense if that was the case. However I am sure they didn't do it biased. I'm like 90% sure.

Considering how many grudges people hold against Jerek for all the comments he's given in the past, I wouldn't be so sure about that.
 

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I was the first one to make an energy vampire, and I was berated with comments about mine being too overpowered because of the strength and speed. Now I look at yours which no one has said a thing about, and I am really pissed. It isn't the fact that no one has said anything that has my piss in a boil. It is the fact that your character is above the power at which I got complaints for my character, and no one has said a thing about it.

Really makes me think that I was fairly judged on my character...
/Sarcasm

*Cough* Um, I believe Zato My character was the first Human Like Vampire Or was close to one...
 

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Jerek, your character had almost no drawbacks. Weiss' has a fair ammount of negatives that would actually cause his character's strengths to be mitigated to an extent.
 

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My character traded his mental stats for physical stats. He had several weaknesses and not only those, but personality weaknesses. I specifically gave him low wisdom, intelligence, chrasima, and constitution for the purpose of him having high strength and speed before I eventually scrapped the stats from all of my characters. Then there was the bunch of flaws with his personaltiy and how he looked. Plus he had anmesia.

You didn't even know what you were talking about.
 

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My character traded his mental stats for physical stats. He had several weaknesses and not only those, but personality weaknesses. I specifically gave him low wisdom, intelligence, chrasima, and constitution for the purpose of him having high strength and speed before I eventually scrapped the stats from all of my characters. Then there was the bunch of flaws with his personaltiy and how he looked. Plus he had anmesia.

You didn't even know what you were talking about.

Life is SO unfair :CCry1
 

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Because intelligent people can not be muscled. Herpa-derpa.

/sarcasm
 

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Which do nothing in an actual situation. "Oh, he's not charismatic! Clearly that means he can be super strong and fast!"

You need to counter strengths with paired weaknesses. Being strong but not knowing how to behave in a social situation is not an appropriate negative.

So, no, I do know what I'm talking about.
 

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Which do nothing in an actual situation. "Oh, he's not charismatic! Clearly that means he can be super strong and fast!"

You need to counter strengths with paired weaknesses. Being strong but not knowing how to behave in a social situation is not an appropriate negative.

So, no, I do know what I'm talking about.

Actually, he got you. You just called out one weakness out of the several weaknesses that he stated. Seriously, while charisma may not do anything, wisdom, intelligence, constitution, and whatever those personality ones were certainly cover the strength and speed.

All in all, I think he has a valid point. Compared to Jerek's character, this one is actually quite more powerful.
 

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Actually, he got you. You just called out one weakness out of the several weaknesses that he stated. Seriously, while charisma may not do anything, wisdom, intelligence, constitution, and whatever those personality ones were certainly cover the strength and speed.

All in all, I think he has a valid point. Compared to Jerek's character, this one is actually quite more powerful.

Have you seen the character that Jerek's referring to? Instead of going by what other people are saying, it would be best to compare this to the actual thread where Jerek's "lamia" is.
 

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He already took out his character stats it seems because I can't find them. However it does seem to have several personality and appearance weaknesses. The comparison is still valid. This character has several more skills and force powers than Jerek's. I can only assume he still utilizes all the stat flaws. I don't see amnesia implied anywhere. I'll be sure to ask him about that.
 

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Actually, he got you. You just called out one weakness out of the several weaknesses that he stated. Seriously, while charisma may not do anything, wisdom, intelligence, constitution, and whatever those personality ones were certainly cover the strength and speed.

All in all, I think he has a valid point. Compared to Jerek's character, this one is actually quite more powerful.

There's more to it than just saying "My constitution is low but I'm super strong."

How's it low? What does it being low effect on your character? Is he/she more apt to get sick/poisoned because of a weak immunity system? Or is it weak in a sense that I just never get sick. There's too many options unless you specifically say something that limits the character, which Weiss has done.

Jerek, I dont know what your character looks like, nor have I RP'd or interacted with you much, but I also know there is some bias towards you from other members. As a person here who has nothing against you nor any prior knowledge of the character, my 2 cents is to link it.

Saying your character has a weak mind but is abnormally gifted in the physical prowess is kind of a cheap way of godmodding your character as well. If my character as a weak mind/intelligence/wisdom but can leap buildings and crush cars with his bulk doesn't really say why hes weak. Even so you could make it something like "His mom never loved him so bringing up his mother really pisses him off." That's not really a weakness as anger can further strengthen yourself at the loss of wit/reason. That said simply saying something is weaker without justifying the weakness isn't really making it a true negative on your character.
 

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I would like to take on you character with some garlic and a stake
 
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