The character game

[Sess]

Like: Mila is freaking awesome in just about every way and form ^-^

Dislike: Her name reminds me of Mire :happy:

random pick time again ^-^

I chose Bone because of his name.

Likes:

Nice PIC!! Super cool..

I like how his stats aren't all crazy.

Interested to see how he gets out of the mines.

I like how the bio was written.

I like his personality, especially his down-to-earth country-folkish kind of... confidence.

Dislike:

I kept thinking wonder should have been wander in the prologue.

I'm not really one for poetry, but I might have preferred a paragraph or two describing the setting and giving info on what the tribes actually are. (Though not too much.)

I actually wish there were more to read. I really enjoyed him. He made my breakfast nachos more enjoyable.




I only have Lanya so do that one, whoever comes next.

 

[The Derp of Hooves]

(thanks for catching that sess ^-^; it was meant to be wander not wonder i always get those cofuzzeled lol...)

Like: very well written and cool profile layout! everything is well in depth which is a nice thing to see from time to time ^-^

Dislike: too many words... lol... that may just be my adhd kicking in and all, but in some places less can be more i think... mostly it was the wall of words for his personality that did for me of all things lol... anyways while having an indepth persona is a welcome site most of the time 6 paragraphs seems a little bit on the excess.... that could be just me but something like that doesn't keep my attention for very long if i'm not fully engaged into it ^-^;

random pick again ^-^

 

[Chairdor]

I pick Theresa

Like: That picture and poem, they fit so well together

Dislike: The biography is a little small and I feel left wondering on many aspects of her backstory rather than wishing to know more

Johnny Wasteland

 

[The Derp of Hooves]

Like: Oh Johnny Johnny Wasteland be he the man everyone wants to be... I loved the lyrics you wrote for his song also, Rocko, who doesn't love a dog like that?

Dislike: You're profiles are too damn pretty :unamused:

Bone be my guy this time

 

[Latte]

Like: Psychopath and the picture is a lot of fun, plus the poem! :D

Dislike: No pretty fonts or colors

Katarina

 

[Srota]

Like: Well Thought out, great detail, and I love the initial first person monologue.

Dislike: This is so minor, but, when she starts listing the reason she hates her job, I think the Aurek item should be on a new line. That is all.

Isoldor, I know he needs work and all, I'd like an opinion on just where, though.

 

[Latte]

Isoldor, I know he needs work and all, I'd like an opinion on just where, though.

Like: The pictures, the bio, and especially the beginning line, "Hapes, what a place"

Dislike: Isoldor... from Hapes. Just reminds me of the Fabio-esque guy from "Courtship of Princess Leia." :unamused: But that's just me being nitpicky. :p

Idk, pick Sasha or Nathan, I don't care.

 

[Fang.]

Sasha:

Like: He is an entertaining and interesting character, max points in being a dick, also those gifs, 10/10 would view again

Dislike: actually nothing, he is a well rounded and fun character. I like him, nothing to dislike.


Fang since I recently had his profile reformmated

 

[Nirvana]

Like: I like that he have been through his fair share of events and that he is a balanced character from what I can see.

Disslike: This is more of just a issue I have with the font on the character template, it's too small. But other then that, i don't find anything that I don't like about him. Keep it up.


Gabriel.

 

[Marf]

Like: He's hawt, and he's a murderous killer XD
Dislike: There's no originally written personality section or bio so there's not much I can critique. I dislike when profiles rely entirely on tropes and alignments to describe a personality.

Satsuki

 

[Andrewza]

like well fleshed out, big boobs and I like how even though she is evil that she still has a heart.

dislike. Dame that was a lot of reading. But it was enjoyable so it cancelled it out. So no dislikes.


Jake

 

[Fang.]

Like: interesting and decently rounded character.

Dislike: unfortunately there were a few things that made this hard for me to read, including spelling and grammatical errors, as well as using the wrong words in some places. Also it's sort of a wall of text, my character Fang was a wall of text for a while, adding some formatting helps people to read it and make it look way better, if you aren't good at formatting, ask someone to help you, that's what I did. Otherwise it's a solid character that just needs to be flushed out a bit more in a couple spots.

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Either or, doesn't matter (be aware that vandheer needs a few updates)

 

[Andrewza]

I looked at Fang. I think the second template is the stronger of the 2.

I like how much he has grown and progressed over the years

I dislike that I can not view your profile on my blackberry.


Jake again since I did some changes to remove the wall of text.

 

[Marf]

Like: The character itself is quite good even if the personality section is way too short.

Dislike: This is going to sound mean, but I have an inane obsession with elegance and elegant looking profiles. This one just looks so plain and messy. The pictures could be centred and a little formatting here and there would look much nicer. Text should be linked instead of just having whole URLs pasted out in full view. I also hate spoiler boxes.

Satoryu

 

[Andrewza]

Like: The character itself is quite good even if the personality section is way too short.

Dislike: This is going to sound mean, but I have an inane obsession with elegance and elegant looking profiles. This one just looks so plain and messy. The pictures could be centred and a little formatting here and there would look much nicer. Text should be linked instead of just having whole URLs pasted out in full view. I also hate spoiler boxes.

Satoryu

I know but I did most of the profile on a cell phone hence they look bland, I am busy trying to spoof up my profiles.

 

[Marf]

How the hell do people write profiles and RP posts on a mobile phone, I've never done it in my life. It takes me hours to write either on a computer. I just wouldn't be able to devote the required amount of concentration, time and effort whilst working on a phone.

Anyway...

Satoryu plz.

 

[Andrewza]

Why do think some of my posts are so short.

Anyway since you asked

like. She is very well developed and her character profile reads like a novel.

Dislike it hard to see just how strong she is. I know this is more about story but I like to look a profile and go "Yes her force push will overwhelm my barrier." Basically I prefer raw numbers along side a written explanation.


Andrew
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?60535-AN3990-Andrew

 

[Cap'n Hobbes]

Likes: Andrew sounds like he'd get along well with Vance :3 I can see a lot of similarities between the two... minus the cyborg dealio xD

Dislike: Nothing much other than a few grammar errors in the profile that are small a miniscule

Vance (second link in sig)

 

[Tiberius Semper]

Like: I love the shockboxing background, that's pretty cool and will serve him well in the Sith Academy, I like his twisted sense of morality and his desire to be independent and self-supporting.
Dislike: The format is a little bare, and I prefer a more numbers approach to stats so I can get a more direct feel of things.

Overall - It's a good profile and I liked the character

Arok the Hutt

 

[Hiro]

Like: Other than being a hutt, that is possibly the coolest character sheet format I've seen so far.

Dislike: Somewhat felt like information overload. And with all that effort, no logged roleplays

Jason